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MANY THANKS TO MAURICE YVONNE (ARMAND) WHO GAVE ME SOME GREAT TIPS TO OVERCOME STAGE FRIGHT .... THEY WORKED!!!

From Obscurity To the Gaiety

All preparation had been completed The big night was finally here At three in the afternoon I went to dress rehearsal Stood on the Gaiety stage for the first time - I didn’t have any fear! Three lovely ladies We were standing behind our microphones Reciting our poems .. to an audience of ONE Rows and rows of empty seats – tonight they would soon fill Would nerves finally hit me, would I start to feel ill … We had a few hours to kill before the show would start Hubby and I went for a meal before I played my part I dressed in my lovely frock – our act would all wear black and white The theatre was a sell out, much to our delight The performance kicked off at eight o’clock Our slot was in the second half so we sat and watched the show Joined in with the audience from spare seats on the back row Time passed by so quickly once the show had begun We rolled about with laughter the acts were such great fun The interval came and we had to go Soon the time would come for us to perform It was freezing cold backstage I wore my cardigan to keep warm! Our names were announced and we walked onto the stage Lights shone down on the three of us But the audience was a sea of faces in the dark I was first to recite my poem ‘Seven men you definitely wouldn’t want to date’ Not a sign of stage fright at all Di recited ‘The Fine’ and Irene ‘1958’ Then it was back to me with ‘Just Desserts’ It was the very first funny poem I’d written Di’s ‘Night Nuisance’ and Irene’s ‘A Transcript’ poems followed With poetry we are all smitten With massive smiles on our faces we walked off the stage Came back later to take a bow The audience applause was rapturous – I can still hear it in my head now! Last night I performed on stage at a charity event in front of 600 people … it was my first time on a ‘proper’ stage at the Victorian Gaiety Theatre and was the most incredible night of my life! The night raised awareness of Parkinson's Disease and Alzheimer's and raised over £6000 ($7410) from ticket sale alone - there were bucket collections too. 11~19~16
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Godwin Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:12 AM
I finally made it here! How I wish I could see this event on tape and I must search your poem, "7 Men .." We are all blessed and enhanced when you share this way. The poem is a great 'journal-type' sharing and well-done, but 'tis the performing itself that truly blows me away. I'm proud of you, Jan ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 1:17 PM
My 7 men poem isn't on the site under that name ... it is just a few of the poems from my three poems men you definitely wouldn't want to date :-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 6:25 AM
A night to be remembered and now shared...Thank You
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 2:26 PM
I wish I could have shared it with you all Judy it was an incredible night I will never forget:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 3:41 AM
- An enormous experience you will never forget, Jan - A great amount of money for an important purpose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 2:27 PM
It was so wonderful to be asked to take part Anne Lise - all the poets who took part write humourous poetry so I fit in very well with the group:-) hugs jan xx
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November 21, 2016 at 2:56 AM
Well done Jan - you are a pure natural at poetry, like your poetry beginning your stage entrance and presence was probably the same a delight to watch and hear. - well done. I'm proud to hear this - congratulations and especially for being part of a team to promote awareness and raise money for a great cause. Mark
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Thanks Mark I can't believe how I have flourished simply by writing poetry:-) hugs jan xx
Rigoler Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 5:41 PM
I've had no doubts about your star eventually rising in the firmament of fame! I read some of my poems before a much smaller group a few years ago and thought I'd faint from nervousness! Not my thing, but I'll have to work on overcoming it for next year's Nobel Prize for absurd poetry. / M
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 5:46 PM
hey if there an award for poop poetry i would go for that award lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Success! I had no doubt you'd be wonderful at reading your poetry, but didn't want to say, "Break a leg." I hope someone videoed it for you, Jan. I'm proud of you.. BIG hugs!
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 4:40 PM
It was recorded Lin I am not sure what will happen to the footage - I hope to be able to get the audio at least to see what I sounded like lol:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Oh, I would have so loved to be there, Jan:) I give my standing ovation too, well done:) it's so good to know that you didn't have stage fright:) and all the best for the rest of the events planned in December:):)
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 4:39 PM
I'm so excited at the future events Jo if I can make someone laugh with my poems that really makes me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 10:46 PM
You immortalized the moment for yourself and your family and friends Jan. A wonderful way to remember your joy and celebrate! Congratulations on having the courage to appear on stage. I enjoyed every word of this poem! Cheers, Connie
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:33 AM
I'm still smiling Connie it was the most incredible night - it is almost 3 years to the day that I wrote my first poem - who would have thought my husband's cancer would have unleashed this creativity and I'd end up on stage!:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 9:53 PM
I am so happy for you it went well Jan! Thanks for sharing it with us :) And WOW at the amount of money raised!! Awesome <3
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:37 AM
Ten years ago the organiser 'Pullyman' was diagnosed with Parkinson's Disease and he started writing very humourous poems about 4 years ago, he now writes a weekly newspaper column and is on the radio every week - he inspires me! It was an honour to be included in 2 of his shows - the one I did in May was in front of about 125 people so this was a real step up to be on a 'proper' stage:-) hugs Jan xx
Mohn Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 8:30 PM
This is marvelous Jan...lovely story and poem to match :)
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Thanks David I had the time of my life!:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 7:00 PM
Jan, how wonderful to hear your story and how great it went with no stage fright, perhaps a stage diva has been created, proud of you ~
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:40 AM
In December I am reciting poems at another charity event organised by the parents of jacques and Torin Lakeman and have also been asked to do poetry at mum's care home:-) If I can make people smile by sharing my funny poems it will be great:-) hugs jan xx
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November 19, 2016 at 6:46 PM
You deserve a night in the spot light and so glad that you enjoyed the experience People enjoy real people and you are one of the genuine ones There will be no holding you back now Be happy enjoy the accomplishment and do it any time you can Hugs Edith
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:42 AM
I have two more events to attend Edith - one is at mum's care home for a Christmas concert and also to recite poems at the day centre and in December there is a fundraising event organised by the parents of Jacques and Torin Lakeman who tragically died in December 2014. Hugs jan xx
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November 19, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Outstanding, Jan! What a wonderful experience for you and for a good cause too! So happy for you! And I enjoyed your poem! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thanks so much Sandra I had the time of my life it was an incredible experience I will treasure the memories ... who would have thought my husband's cancer has brought me such happiness by starting me writing for the first time - it will be 3 years to the day on 26th November when Splendid Isolation was written - i have learned so so much i can't believe what a journey I have been on:-) hugs Jan xx
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November 19, 2016 at 4:11 PM
There will be no stopping you now Jan. I'm so glad you enjoyed your night in the spotlight.
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 4:16 PM
It was the most incredible night Jean I can't stop smiling :-) :-) I've been asked to perform at a christmas concert at mum's carehome and also at another charity fundraiser being held by the parent's of Jacques and Torin Lakeman who died so tragically in December 2014. I never guessed how my husband's cancer would bring me such an incredible hobby and change my life forever :-) hugs jan xx
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November 19, 2016 at 2:59 PM
WOW! WOW! WOW! I just knew you would knock it out of the park. I certainly didn't deserve any credit but i'll take what I can get. Only you would be so gracious as to thank me. I love you ssssoooo much. This will go to the top of my list of favs. I can't express how proud I am of you. How lucky I am to be able to call myself your friend. You have been a true blessing in my life. I just posted a poem myself. I need prayers Jan!
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Armand - your mail gave me confidence to believe in myself and for that I am truly grateful - I had the most amazing night of my life:-) will drop by your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
B. Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:40 PM
I am so happy for you Jan. It was must have been an amazing feeling. You should be proud of all you have accomplished. Your poetry always brings a smile to my face. You're a bright light her at the soup. :) Congratulations!!
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Carol:-):-) I had the time of my life - my mum was in the audience she was so so so proud:-) Hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:21 PM
I am so happy for you sweet Jan...and proud of you too..I just wish I was there in the crowd ...front seat applauding you..big hugs xxx
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Charma it was the most incredible night I still can't wipe the smile from my face no nerves at all it was such a fun night:-) The Gaiety Theatre is a stunning venue it was an honour to be asked to be part of the event.:-) hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:23 PM
How beautiful the theatre is.
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