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From Now On

From now on, I'll focus eyes above the trees
when years have yet to be designed
with unknown lands, the eyes can't see.

I can't forget what's  left behind,
or the weight of tears that buckled knees,
but will look ahead, and set them free

Scars left upon the heart grew deep 
and I felt the thorns that taunted me
But, I'll  release the ghosts and set them free
to make my peace with destiny.
 
Some tears have washed away the times,
of steeper footpaths that I have climbed.
I will persevere, again, regain
a willingness to change the rhyme

Next year has yet to be designed
where eyes can see, where promise lies
We can't forget what's left behind,
but to all those things, let's say goodbye...
and spread new wings to fly

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gentry Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:30 AM
Congratulations on your win! This is a fave for me. Well written, inspirational and reflective.
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 10:57 PM
I love your take on this theme a LOT. It is a little bit like mine. Congrats. You deserved a big win for this one.
A  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Carrie, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:24 PM
A great entry and win, Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lawless Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Carrie, I love the last line, I find it to be the catalyst for the change intimated in the poem. Congrats.
Allison Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 6:30 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 8:54 PM
very touching entry, congrats on your win Carrie
Walker  Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Lovely Carrie... This was enjoyed. You write about all positive things bringing forth new life... Verlena
Fleming Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Another excellent poem, Carrie!! You obviously have talent!! :) john.
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Excellent Carrie...release the ghosts of the past...great things will come...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 3:40 PM
I'm so so glad i don't know what is around the corner Carrie - I take each day at a time and hope for better days - love the sentiment in your write - good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx
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