From Her Aural Rune

Her melody floats in evanescence, as the child in me hushes beneath needles of rain… yet we sashay in an evening drenched with a quiver, as Mom listens to harsh tap- tapping on the attic. She observes the gentle crack through my voice noticing a slight fear while the gale rouses into louder howls… Calmly,a tinder box of notes spills on Mama's piano, as she perceives keenly and waits for the explosion of stars opening up—to bounce unto the window… finally reddening, drying the night. And her instinct feels the pull to soothe my breath: this aural rune gently spun as we tuck ourselves headlong within a quilt of our dwelling, where the maternal language from her own innate sound need not—through rain— be as told in words. ............. Craig Cornish's A Mother's Ears 5/11/2015

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Date: 5/29/2015 6:51:00 AM
Hello my very dear friend Nette! Big congrats on your very wonderful Mothers day poem and your win! Big hugs and cheers! BTW, How are you? I'm finally back in BKK, Wed. last wk with mom! Thanks a lot for your replies and prayers! Now, back to school for the 1st semester.Whew! I need more break :)) Hope you're doin well always. Sending you my warmest hugs. I'll try to call you as soon as I get the international calling card fr. a friend, ok. I miss you. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:29:00 PM
so exquisitely delicate. such lenitive sound. question, please. are the stars metaphor for candles? lovely poem.
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:01:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Awesome entry for Craig's "A Mother's Ears" contest. Have a great day. LINDA
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:20:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2015 10:18:00 PM
Very Nice Nette, congrats!
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Date: 5/18/2015 7:47:00 PM
Enchanted are your verses, which are exquisitely written into a quilt of mother-love! Congratulations, Nette !
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Date: 5/18/2015 3:59:00 PM
a wonderful tribute Nette - this is so beautiful - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/11/2015 11:10:00 PM
Dear Net, What a truthful mothers day write, it's the best one I've read so far because of it's honesty, wonderful tribute of reality, loved it alot, cheri
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:40:00 PM
Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the love you hold for your mother. Emile.
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Date: 5/11/2015 9:38:00 AM
Such a wonderful "Rune" of mother's "Aura" dear poet ! A wonderful title Nette, displaying mother's wonderful bright poetically, portraying mother radiantly ! Have a blessed week my friend........much love, james
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:54:00 AM
beautiful poem Nette!Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 5/11/2015 12:10:00 AM
Being a mother is a great experience and being a daughter who loves and cherishes her mother is the best... great pen Nette
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Date: 5/10/2015 6:39:00 PM
I hear the soft piano music, the stars, the gentle heartbeat of a mother's love. I beautiful scene of a wonderful love. Nicely done Ms. Onclaud. 7
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:45:00 PM
this is just awesome, Nette
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:27:00 PM
- It's a gift to be a mother - a beautiful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:22:00 PM
A very beautiful poem on Mothers Day. Thank you for sharing this. Happy Mothers Day. A7
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Date: 5/10/2015 1:19:00 PM
Lovely piece...... wrapped in wordings of high mastery..... Really enjoyed the ending ....Thanks for sharing this !!!
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Date: 5/10/2015 12:55:00 PM
She knew just what to do to soothe your fears..lovely Tim
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