From Her Aural Rune

Her melody floats in evanescence, as the child in me hushes beneath needles of rain… yet we sashay in an evening drenched with a quiver, as Mom listens to harsh tap- tapping on the attic. She observes the gentle crack through my voice noticing a slight fear while the gale rouses into louder howls… Calmly,a tinder box of notes spills on Mama's piano, as she perceives keenly and waits for the explosion of stars opening up—to bounce unto the window… finally reddening, drying the night. And her instinct feels the pull to soothe my breath: this aural rune gently spun as we tuck ourselves headlong within a quilt of our dwelling, where the maternal language from her own innate sound need not—through rain— be as told in words. ............. Craig Cornish's A Mother's Ears 5/11/2015
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Gasun Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 6:51 AM
Hello my very dear friend Nette! Big congrats on your very wonderful Mothers day poem and your win! Big hugs and cheers! BTW, How are you? I'm finally back in BKK, Wed. last wk with mom! Thanks a lot for your replies and prayers! Now, back to school for the 1st semester.Whew! I need more break :)) Hope you're doin well always. Sending you my warmest hugs. I'll try to call you as soon as I get the international calling card fr. a friend, ok. I miss you. love lots, Leonora
Miers Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 8:29 PM
so exquisitely delicate. such lenitive sound. question, please. are the stars metaphor for candles? lovely poem.
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May 22, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Awesome entry for Craig's "A Mother's Ears" contest. Have a great day. LINDA
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May 19, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. SKAT
Ebbs Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:18 PM
Very Nice Nette, congrats!
Richards Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Enchanted are your verses, which are exquisitely written into a quilt of mother-love! Congratulations, Nette !
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 3:59 PM
a wonderful tribute Nette - this is so beautiful - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Dunn Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Dear Net, What a truthful mothers day write, it's the best one I've read so far because of it's honesty, wonderful tribute of reality, loved it alot, cheri
Pinet Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the love you hold for your mother. Emile.
Peranteau Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Such a wonderful "Rune" of mother's "Aura" dear poet ! A wonderful title Nette, displaying mother's wonderful bright poetically, portraying mother radiantly ! Have a blessed week my friend........much love, james
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 3:54 AM
beautiful poem Nette!Best wishes for the contest.
Relish Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Being a mother is a great experience and being a daughter who loves and cherishes her mother is the best... great pen Nette
Meade Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 6:39 PM
I hear the soft piano music, the stars, the gentle heartbeat of a mother's love. I beautiful scene of a wonderful love. Nicely done Ms. Onclaud. 7
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 5:45 PM
this is just awesome, Nette
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 2:27 PM
- It's a gift to be a mother - a beautiful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Das Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 2:22 PM
A very beautiful poem on Mothers Day. Thank you for sharing this. Happy Mothers Day. A7
Aniagyei Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 1:19 PM
Lovely piece...... wrapped in wordings of high mastery..... Really enjoyed the ending ....Thanks for sharing this !!!
Smith Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 12:55 PM
She knew just what to do to soothe your fears..lovely Tim
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