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From Dispatch To Bus Drivers Poetry Contest

Stay alert vision 360 Anything else just too risky Forget the sky look around Top tip: don't run anyone down Bikes and pedestrians may take their chance Be sure give more than one quick glance

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/23/2023 9:43:00 AM

I absolutely love this entry. Congrats on your top win in my contest.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/23/2023 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Miranda - it was an interesting twist for a prompt x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/19/2023 7:01:00 AM

Good one DD best of luck. SV

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/19/2023 7:43:00 AM

Thank SV x

Valsa George

Date: 7/19/2023 6:07:00 AM

So crisp and clear but blatantly reminding the drivers what to do and what not to do. Great entry for the contest.... DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/19/2023 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Valsa - perhaps it'll end up in use from the sounds of contest :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/18/2023 3:38:00 PM

almost a job of "superhero", just exquisite poem

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/18/2023 11:39:00 PM

Thank you Yann, glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting