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From Devastation

from utter ruin nature creates such beauty- spring birds in the trees ______________________ November 8, 2012 Poetry/Haiku/from devastation Copyright Protected, ID 11-4343-72-08 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the contest, One Haiku Old/New sponsor, Rick Parise, Judged 11/2012 Third Place

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/13/2017 7:23:00 PM

I like the way you've expressed the rebirth of Mother Nature, BW. Congrats for placing 3rd in the contest!! ;-)

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/9/2017 11:28:00 AM

Very nice, congrats :)

John Lawless

Date: 6/8/2017 3:05:00 PM

rising up like the Phoenix.....Be well Constance....for you are one of the beauties nature created.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2017 2:38:00 PM

A delightful KU, constance. besides congratulations, I am here to wish you well. Please rest well this weekend,dear!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2012 2:48:00 PM

love this beautiful haiku, Constance

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 10:50:00 AM

I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it as always Constance. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 5:01:00 AM

A very well written haiku poem, Constance. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2012 7:38:00 PM

Beautiful !Such a hopeful ending.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2012 5:20:00 PM

This is the first Haiku in this contest that I have read that focused on the good that comes out of such a painful occurrence! You have brought light at the end of a long dark tunnel! I really enjoyed reading this vastly outstanding and masterfully awesome poem this evening! What a delight it has been to read such a fascinating and pleasant piece, Great Work!!