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From Ages Past

from ages past near the sea so close there is but a seal whisker between my toes and the grasping ripples I ear the voices sing they come bubbling up from deeps farther than tomorrow whispering in ancient tongues from long drowned lips blue green with algae. the tears of their dying eyes those who sailed flying across restless water are swept away and lost among the alto drops but songs remain forever beaten out against rocky cliffs shot from the blow holes of leviathons sifted and clicked through the claws of crabs. passage of time has no meaning for they are locked into their age as inextricably as shackled prisoners yet the songs are here, now each surrounds me with their lives.

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Date: 10/11/2017 7:01:00 PM
I too love "among the alto drops". Nice writing, love the subject of the sea, lovely imagery.cheers.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thank you D.
Date: 10/11/2017 2:47:00 AM
Dear Patricia, this is a great display of creative artistry. Well done!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Chijioke and welcome to my home.
Date: 10/10/2017 8:47:00 PM
Hi Patrica very wonderful writing,
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Kishan It is good of you to drop by, welcome.
Date: 10/10/2017 8:23:00 PM
I have just finished reding yourn poetry andi have enjoye them all.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:22:00 PM
You have honoured me by reading my work. Thank you.
Date: 10/10/2017 6:40:00 PM
Amazing..."among the alto drops." Penned elegantly! Lovely share?
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you for your time and kindness.
Date: 10/10/2017 3:13:00 PM
A touching poetry on our feelings and responsibility.Deep imagery following sensibility and talent.Best wishes.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:23:00 PM
thank you.
Date: 10/10/2017 3:06:00 PM
Brilliant
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/10/2017 1:34:00 PM
Hi Patricia, seems like youre touching deep here. All on PS is applauding. Im the jerk in front clapping the loudest
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:28:00 PM
Not a jerk a good friend, thank you.
Date: 10/10/2017 12:31:00 PM
Absolutely BRILLIANT dear Patricia! Impressed? Oh yah!!! More like this would be appreciated! STUNNING! Love, Jackson xxxxxx
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:28:00 PM
Jack you make me blush thanks.
Date: 10/8/2017 8:22:00 PM
Triple Wowsa! Trying to pin down a favorite phrase or line — brain just melts into a mass of wowsas. alto drops wowsa wowsa wowsa!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:31:00 PM
Hello Mr. Bones how are you? Deserting us for warmer climes I hear. Will miss you. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 10/7/2017 10:15:00 PM
Hi Patricia, wonderful powerful poem. (check line 5 again) Love it. Best wishes from Ottawa.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:37:00 PM
Hi Line thanks for commenting.
Date: 10/7/2017 3:36:00 PM
Excellently penned. Thanks for shading.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:40:00 PM
You are most welcome. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/7/2017 2:26:00 PM
The sea captures secrets and prisoners in its body of tumultuous emotion. Nicely written x
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:42:00 PM
The sea to me is unending and inscrutable. I keep trying to uncover its secrets but there are just more. Thank you Thvia
Date: 10/7/2017 8:39:00 AM
Wow, this is some awesome writing, I love your descriptions! "but a seal whisker between my toes" :) Very creative poem you've written, Patricia!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 6:33:00 PM
Seal whiskers tickle. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 10/7/2017 6:37:00 AM
I am impessed by your depth of writing, especially within this huge write my friend! I especially loved the lines, "shot from the blow holes of leviathons/sifted and clicked through the claws of crabs," such grand lines they are! What a powerful poem Patricia, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Russell and hello Emma. Take care my dears.
Date: 10/7/2017 3:30:00 AM
Oh boy Patricia, this is a GREAT poem. I meditate, and contemplate, and am immersing myself in something new for me, that touches on your poem. I'm impressed.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/11/2017 5:00:00 PM
Hi Darren how are you? thanks for your interesting comment you have piqued my curiosity about your meditation.

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