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From a Dot

One final leap from high solitude into city of dusk, takes you to presence of charred remains of a fallen god. A housewife moves in the kitchen to prepare a farewell dinner for the encounter of fatal descent. A paranormal parting to comeback to body of truth, as you pick up your words. Space odyssey in eyes, palms folding, to receive the punishment. No complaints, no grieving conclusion of foregone stopping. A line will start from a dot. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2010 6:59:00 PM
Thought provoking poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/19/2010 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem featured this week, Satish. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Satish. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 2:22:00 PM
Congrats Satish on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a special piece to share with us all with luv this happy Sunday...
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