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Frog in the Fog

I waited for you to kiss me So your love could set me free Sadly you were concerned by looks Nightmares aren’t only in books Sure it is true that I am green Inner strength isn’t easily seen So my dear I am still a frog On a lily pad in the fog A Prince trapped for eternity You Princess did not set me free I would settle for just a hug Instead I’m dining on a bug Today I hop along my way You married no reason to stay A toad you chose that’s so absurd Better looking that’s what I heard. “The Double Swap Contest” hosted by Joseph May

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Robert Pettit

Date: 7/22/2025 4:27:00 PM

Looks like a contender. I for one like it!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2025 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/21/2025 2:54:00 PM

Richard, there’s no need to worry any more. She got her just desserts. It takes a long time for some to appreciate inner beauty. A fun poem that takes quite a leap. Smiles!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2025 12:58:00 PM

Hahaha, great response Duke.

Anne Winter

Date: 7/20/2025 9:37:00 PM

Oh my, poor frog. I don't know if I should grin or feel sad for the frog. The princess should know that looks can be deceiving. Brilliantly written! I really enjoyed this! Very well written!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2025 10:35:00 PM

Thanks Anne.;0)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/19/2025 9:04:00 PM

Ha, ha. Great contest entry, Richard. ~ Green Around the Gills

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2025 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Gershon.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/19/2025 6:22:00 PM

Enjoyed the read very much Richard. A frog may love you, then jump away fast, but a toad will stay with you as long as life lasts… Beryl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2025 2:26:00 PM

Hahaha, I think I will pass on toads or frogs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2025 5:36:00 PM

Oh I love this whimsical approach you took here. Wonderful

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2025 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Paige Hind

Date: 7/19/2025 2:53:00 PM

LOL what a cute poem!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2025 2:27:00 PM

Thanks Paige.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/19/2025 11:07:00 AM

This is really cute. Good luck with the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2025 2:09:00 PM

Thanks Hilda.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/19/2025 9:58:00 AM

She probably took off with a cane toad. They're big boys. Cute poem

Tom Woody
Date: 7/19/2025 12:56:00 PM

Norman. Just call me Norm

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2025 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Tim. *lol*

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/19/2025 9:57:00 AM

Hello Richard, This one had me grinning and nodding along for you managed to give that classic fairy tale a wonderfully witty twist! The rhyme and rhythm skip as playfully as the frog on his lily pad. There’s a real charm to the frog’s acceptance as he hops along, still a little wistful but not defeated. It’s clever, bittersweet, and totally relatable who hasn’t felt like the odd one out? I’ll gladly sit on the next lily pad to listen! Summer Blessings, My Friend Daniel

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2025 11:01:00 AM

Great response Daniel. I appreciate the visit.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2025 6:41:00 AM

LOL! Clever and funny!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2025 7:19:00 AM

Thanks Kim.