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Frisky As Two-Year-Olds

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*Image of Conhece-te a ti mesmo (Know thyself) by Pinterest. Frisky as Two-Year-Olds HIM: Anything unputdownable? HER: Yes, and you? HIM: Lucky, we're here, we'll continue indoors ... and leave the book! HER: Don't forget the kids, I'll carry Puddy-Tat upstairs ... HIM: I'll persuade Pup-Tart outside. HER: Meet you at the rendezvous! 2022 July 25 *3rd Place* Short verse inspired by pictures ~~Lisa YY: Judged 2022 August 09 *PS Grammar; 40 words exact

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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/10/2022 4:21:00 AM
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Dramatically done. Congratulations!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/10/2022 4:36:00 AM
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'Twas fun, Christuraj, thanks, Aloha~William
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/6/2022 7:52:00 PM
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This is such a cute entry William. Still smiling. Thank you. Blessings xxoo
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/6/2022 9:43:00 PM
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Thanks for the perk, Connie, an indelible piece I must say my friend, Aloha~William
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Constance La France
Date: 8/3/2022 10:07:00 AM
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Hilo, I love this sweet poem, delightful, and best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/3/2022 10:25:00 AM
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Thank you, Constance, for your thought-filled sentiments truly my friend, Aloha~William
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/28/2022 1:36:00 PM
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First line struck me as hey...something I would say. this is such a cute frisky tale! Good luck in the contest! ~Anaya
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2022 2:31:00 PM
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Hehe! Thought it'd be thorough throughout, Anaya, thanks for your sentiments and boost my friend, Aloha~William
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/28/2022 4:47:00 AM
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WOW Witty Really Enjoyed Blessings
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2022 10:59:00 AM
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Thanks, Anisha, I'll soupmail you soon my friend, Aloha~William
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/26/2022 11:49:00 AM
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wow, 40 words exact!!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2022 11:55:00 AM
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To keep up, Andrea, I struggle a bit but I try, c'est la vie mon amie, Aloha~William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2022 4:23:00 AM
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Cute!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/25/2022 4:34:00 AM
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Thanks, Kim, quick my friend, Aloha~William

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