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Frisky As Two-Year-Olds

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*Image of Conhece-te a ti mesmo (Know thyself) by Pinterest.


Frisky as Two-Year-Olds


HIM: Anything unputdownable?
HER: Yes, and you?
HIM: Lucky, we're here, we'll continue indoors ... and leave the book!
HER: Don't forget the kids, I'll carry Puddy-Tat upstairs ...
HIM: I'll persuade Pup-Tart outside.
HER: Meet you at the rendezvous!

2022 July 25
*3rd Place*
Short verse inspired by pictures
~~Lisa YY: Judged 2022 August 09

*PS Grammar; 40 words exact

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Christuraj Alex Date: 8/10/2022 4:21:00 AM Dramatically done. Congratulations! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/10/2022 4:36:00 AM 'Twas fun, Christuraj, thanks, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/6/2022 7:52:00 PM This is such a cute entry William. Still smiling. Thank you. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/6/2022 9:43:00 PM Thanks for the perk, Connie, an indelible piece I must say my friend, Aloha~William

Constance La France Date: 8/3/2022 10:07:00 AM Hilo, I love this sweet poem, delightful, and best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 8/3/2022 10:25:00 AM Thank you, Constance, for your thought-filled sentiments truly my friend, Aloha~William

I Am Anaya Date: 7/28/2022 1:36:00 PM First line struck me as hey...something I would say. this is such a cute frisky tale! Good luck in the contest! ~Anaya Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/28/2022 2:31:00 PM Hehe! Thought it'd be thorough throughout, Anaya, thanks for your sentiments and boost my friend, Aloha~William

Anisha Dutta Date: 7/28/2022 4:47:00 AM WOW Witty Really Enjoyed Blessings Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/28/2022 10:59:00 AM Thanks, Anisha, I'll soupmail you soon my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2022 11:49:00 AM wow, 40 words exact!! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/26/2022 11:55:00 AM To keep up, Andrea, I struggle a bit but I try, c'est la vie mon amie, Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/25/2022 4:23:00 AM Cute! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 7/25/2022 4:34:00 AM Thanks, Kim, quick my friend, Aloha~William