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Frigid

As the smoke rises from the roof of the house On a crisp, below zero winters day It looks like a scene from a Norman Rockwell print I can almost smell the Gingerbread bake The gentle breeze, blows the smoke away Yet, the ice cold air, robs me of breath like the very razors edge of Spring is at stake I hear her love song, call me in the wind Winters hold, is a frigid icy death Reminds me of a winters New England stint Shall I remain inside, Shall I rescind? Like a creature not stirring, like the Christmas Eve Mouse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/23/2009 5:29:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I don't understand what a pantoum is yet but I'll have to figure it out soon if this is what it does for poetry.-Robert
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Date: 12/18/2009 9:03:00 PM
I can see , smell and taste every word in it! Well done.
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Date: 12/18/2009 8:46:00 PM
Excellent write, Taz, and luv the use of your words in this form of poetry.. so many ways to express and u have done it well.. glad u enjoyed my "sassy" classy poem tonight too.. appreciate your comments ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:23:00 PM
good one!! enjoyed
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:34:00 PM
Sounds like inside next to the fire with the gingerbread would a warm comfy place to be but sometimes the outside just calls our name. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/17/2009 7:53:00 PM
This is cute.Made me smile for a second.I posted a new poem.r5
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:42:00 PM
Excellent pantoum you have penned here my love! Superb imagery really paints the picture in the reader's mind! Another wonderful write! I love you..hugs~Mary
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Date: 12/17/2009 10:02:00 AM
Pantoum is a fun form.. Good form, good poem pop......:JP]
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