Frigid

As the smoke rises from the roof of the house
On a crisp, below zero winters day
It looks like a scene from a Norman Rockwell print
I can almost smell the Gingerbread bake
The gentle breeze, blows the smoke away
Yet, the ice cold air, robs me of breath
like the very razors edge of Spring is at stake
I hear her love song, call me in the wind
Winters hold, is a frigid icy death
Reminds me of a winters New England stint
Shall I remain inside, Shall I rescind?
Like a creature not stirring, like the Christmas Eve Mouse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dufresne Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 5:29 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I don't understand what a pantoum is yet but I'll have to figure it out soon if this is what it does for poetry.-Robert
Byrne Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 9:03 PM
I can see , smell and taste every word in it! Well done.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 8:46 PM
Excellent write, Taz, and luv the use of your words in this form of poetry.. so many ways to express and u have done it well.. glad u enjoyed my "sassy" classy poem tonight too.. appreciate your comments ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 5:23 PM
good one!! enjoyed
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Sounds like inside next to the fire with the gingerbread would a warm comfy place to be but sometimes the outside just calls our name. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
Bono Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:53 PM
This is cute.Made me smile for a second.I posted a new poem.r5
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 6:42 PM
Excellent pantoum you have penned here my love! Superb imagery really paints the picture in the reader's mind! Another wonderful write! I love you..hugs~Mary
Pickett Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Pantoum is a fun form.. Good form, good poem pop......:JP]
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