Friendship

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In my mid-twenties, whenever I would got out girl shopping late at night at the local nightclubs, My friends and I always made sure we rode together. Just in case one of us got lucky and went home with a girl..lol

Friendship A night on the town I'll pay for your beverages Only two of course I'm not drinking, so...I'll drive It's your birthday, let's have fun We will ask some girls to dance Maybe, one will take you home Ottoanka Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor Martin Brown 3-5-2019

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/6/2019 11:05:00 PM

You are a good friend. Best wishes. Just to add: Regarding your contest, my poem ended in couplet, rhyming with ''whelms' and 'flames'.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2019 2:42:00 PM

men will be men... what a charming piece with a hope you got a girl, charles...huggs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/6/2019 3:15:00 AM

A cute tanka that made me smile, Charles. Has such a loud ring of truth, friendship and sheer optimism.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/5/2019 12:50:00 PM

You're a good buddy, Charles. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2019 11:34:00 AM

- ... you really are a good friend, Charlie :))) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)