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23.05.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Friday Twirl - Weekend Humor -


                                    What a marvelous feeling
                                    Turn on the dance switch
                                     - still a flower in the bud

                                  The spare battery is charged
                                          when Friday comes
                                         I guess you are able
                                      to keep up with my pace

                                        Spinning and twirling
                                               Cut loose,  
                                  in boogie, shag or belly dance
                                     - the moon and the stars
                                           will shine all night
                                           - no time to sleep
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George Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 11:22 PM
Sensing your rising spirit, I don't think many can keep up with your pace. :) It being Friday, you seem to be in a holiday mood spinning and twirling away the night long. Enjoy and have fun, dear. Hugs!
Andresen Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 4:34 AM
- I wish it were me... but, Friday is a completely normal day... I write these poems just for fun and encouragement, Valsa :) - Thank you very much for reading :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Dance until you drop! I here you. I am going to go out dancing...one way or another. Friday night fever.
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:11 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment ... have fun, Joe :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, such a fantastic and amusing poem; certainly, Friday evenings should not be spent sleeping! Best wishes, Anne:).
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:10 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Las :) - (not for any contest, just for fun :) - hugs
Winter Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, what a brilliant and fun poem! Love it! Best, Anne :)
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:11 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Anne :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 1:19 PM
Awwn yes friday nights should not be about sleep but just maybe live it up a little! Im here watching a horror movie with family while having headache lol not so fun! Pleasure reading your poem! Sending you light always
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:13 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment ... Don't watch TV or the internet with a headache... it will only get worse, Ink - hugs
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Dance on, Anne-Lise. You don't need batteries if you have the right dance partner. I mean that in the moral sense!
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 12:06 PM
- I have a non-dancing husband... maybe he needs batteries :))) - hugs and happy weekend :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:43 AM
What a fun "Friday Twirl" write you have here. Great Picture and Love Both... OK!!! let's Dance??? Hugs... Have a fun weekend writing away..........
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 12:08 PM
- Thank you for wanting to dance with me, Paula :) - I'm not good at belly dancing... :))) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
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