Friday the . ..13th!

FRIDAY THE 13TH

If there ever was such a day,
you could take it all away!
Would you do it?

If there ever was a day,
you could climb up on my tree!
Would you be my chimpanzee?

If there ever was a day you could see a gypsy in the stars,
you could reach and  stretch our travel beyond and far!
Would you look up and risk to loose your own neck?

If there was a day you could breath me in deeply,
you could get lost in my bedroom eyes!
Would you stare me down sweetly?

If there is such a day to take the stop sign off my face,
you could mend things and turn on our green light!
Would you continue to let me invade your space?

If there ever was a day you want to surrender your love to me
You could indulge my body language as your # 1 key!
Would you give me the best heated moments of your life?

If we could have more than just one day,
with out bad luck getting in the way!
Would you say lets just sleep through FRIDAY THE 13th all DAY?

If we could figure out what happen earlier to day,
you could offer me peace & blame it on FRIDAY THE 13TH!
Would you could you just stop blaming us and blame on the 13th?

                                ~SKAT~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/8/2014 8:12:00 AM
Nice write Skat...rhanks for stopping by...hugs
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:58:00 PM
SKAT This is a cute and clever write. Full of imagination and creativity, which keep the reader entertained. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Silent Monster poem. Hugs
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Date: 12/9/2010 11:49:00 AM
only jelousy can awaken unforgiving wrath. you must have crossed that line of that fence that said betrayal. sorrry for being blunt and honest but these are the facts of life. john
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Date: 10/1/2010 8:19:00 AM
Enjoyed the read of your funny poem, SKAT! I really can't believe that people still belive that Friday the 13th would mean bad luck! A Friday 13th was always my lucky day. Enjoyed! And thank your for your kind comments! Have agreat weekend! Love, Gert
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:34:00 PM
Funny Skat. People blame everything on Friday the thirteenth. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 9/13/2010 2:02:00 AM
Nice and lovely write my friend. Some dates are always very important to all of us for different reasons. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....s k a t.
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:16:00 PM
Friday the 13th is a good day for me. It was the day my dad was born and he was a very successful man and a great dad. He died in August 1976 and was buried on Friday the 13th. Very good poem, Keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile Thanks for you commet on my poem Uncle Sam We Need You
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:26:00 PM
keep writing. and thanks for the comments
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Date: 8/20/2010 5:58:00 AM
skat thanks so much for great comments s mailed u x
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Date: 8/19/2010 11:04:00 PM
HI, again, and thanks for your comment! LUv ya , andrea
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:12:00 PM
Hey S.K.A.T. Irma my BBF.. will be married this Sunday.. when are u gonna judge your Summer Haiku contest.. so I can hoop and holler luv.. haha.. am thinking of u while in sunny Italy.. if u have time read my blogs on my son.. he had emergency surgery in Iraq..luv.. prayers please.. ciao
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:19:00 PM
Your rhymin dearie me!!! you see that right? Form Rhyme! LOL push that envelope girl friend! Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:13:00 PM
OO! Mom blame it on the rain, it is raining right now =(^.^)=
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:05:00 PM
Friday the 13th can take it. Go ahead and blame the day and make up. Cute little poem. Thank you for your comments on my latest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/18/2010 9:05:00 AM
Absoulutely adorable poem. Love, Susan
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Date: 8/17/2010 5:19:00 PM
Verses 5&6 are hard to top. I read them twice. You have got your style down pat. AND THAT"S THAT! Best wishes and thank you! Gerard.
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Date: 8/17/2010 3:03:00 PM
was almost afraid to read it-well done!
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Date: 8/16/2010 10:28:00 PM
have a great night, Irma(: ~Always&Forever
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Date: 8/16/2010 9:24:00 PM
HI, Irma, just stopping by to say hi! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:36:00 PM
funny one...enjoyed
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:46:00 AM
Love the day and your perfect write... excllent!! Always Michael
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:07:00 AM
it all blends together,..p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:47:00 AM
Hey Irma, interesting write on the dreaded Friday the 13th.. We survived with a :) Would also like to thank you for that huge compliment, really means a lot.. Only been write for under a year now, sometimes I write with my emotions which is scary because I cant hide what I got through at a particular time.. But I've learned to embrace it.. Once again thanks, hope you'll having a great weekend, love Wilma
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:26:00 AM
as the notorious f.l.i.r.t i must say that any day is a good day for me s.k.a.t any time any place. just don't let your husband find out. lol. great write sweetie. glad to see you here.
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Date: 8/14/2010 10:43:00 AM
I got through it. Hope you did, old friend. Dave
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