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fresh snow on the old path I find myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/28/2023 5:48:00 PM
Nice Monoku, Sara. Write On! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/29/2023 4:56:00 AM
write on, too, Bill...you are my sonnet meister, hugs!
Date: 11/28/2023 4:37:00 AM
Excellent one. I like the brevity. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 5:00:00 AM
thanks Sara K for stopping by. I appreciate your complimentary and kind words. I liked the brevity of this one too. Have a splendid day, Sara B
Date: 11/27/2023 7:27:00 PM
So many possible meanings here, Sara. Brilliant framing, I say. ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2023 4:19:00 AM
thank you, Gershon, for seeing the depth in these words. I agree with you...have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 6:50:00 PM
so melancholic, for me, i guess, exquisite verse, thanks poet
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 4:20:00 AM
thank you kindly, Yann. Yes, I suppose the poem is a bit melancholic...that's the way I was feeling when I wrote it. Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 6:05:00 PM
Pretty! Love the contrast and warm feelings that are produced!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 4:20:00 AM
thanks, Kim, for noticing the contrast and warmth. I appreciate your visits. Have a wonderful Tuesday, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 5:41:00 PM
A simple, refreshing poem. The photograph highlighted the vastness of snow.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 4:21:00 AM
thank you, sweet Hilda, for your visit and kind words about both the poem and the photo. I appreciate you...have a splendid Tuesday, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 5:39:00 PM
Through your profound poetry, I am able to perceive the intricate symbolism of the pristine snow delicately blanketing the worn pathway, while simultaneously contemplating one's own journey.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/28/2023 4:23:00 AM
thank you, dear Sotto, for your in-depth comments. Your words tell me that you 'got' the message. I'm grateful! Have a splendid Tuesday, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 11/27/2023 4:52:00 PM
Deep poetry! I can see your image and logic... enjoyed this!
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Date: 11/27/2023 5:19:00 PM
thank you for your complimentary words, Paige, and for seeing the depth to my poem. Have a splendid evening, Sara Enjoy the holiday season, too :-)

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