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Frenzical Fingers

Fingers, Fingers, I just let them go, Where they will take this, I just don't know. They are moving so fast right now they're a blurr, They are even making my nerves start to stir. But I am letting them go to where they have got, What they are writing, a clue I have not. For they are in a frenzy you see, And that is just what they want to be. They want to move so fast I can't stop, If I do, I think that from my hands they might drop. So go fingers, go...to where you will, I shant stop you from even putting down swill. Because the frenzy has caught them, And now they want to answer it some. They still have not stopped, or even slowed down, I feel like I'm writing like Bozo the Clown! But if I am I'll just take it in stride, It's the fingers that have done it, so nothing to hide. After all, I couldn't get by without their frantic pace, When I want to write on this poetry place. So why should I stop them when they want a chance, To make the keys tingle and jump to their dance. I guess they are getting tired and sore, Or maybe they think that what they've put down is a bore. Well, however it turns out it will be their own plight, After all, it was Finger Frenzy, that brought out this fight!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2010 3:08:00 PM
Oh, I love this one, Daniel! Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:13:00 AM
Hi Dan, awesom write and don't stop your fingers when your pen is flowing!!! Thanky for your comments and have a great week...Gert
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:59:00 PM
awesome couplet. & very amusing finger frenzy moment(: haha. congrats to you, Daniel! ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Great write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:48:00 AM
yes the word possesion comes to mind! Nice use of form! Light & Love
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:40:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your third place finish in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 6/12/2010 7:33:00 AM
funny and sweet,congrat!enjoyed those frenzy fingers!Celene
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:08:00 AM
Wonderful poem Daniel, I was picturing a guitarist at first, many congratulations on your win. Thank you for your kind comments >> James
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:02:00 AM
Congrats with this frenzied write, Dan!! and haha where were you 12 years ago?? I sure needed you during that time to suggest sending that roll of tape---really glad you liked my narrative :)
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Good job.
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:46:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your success in my contest with this amazing write... appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:30:00 PM
Extremely funny yet charming and well thought out, keep up the " thinking outside the box"
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