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Freighter At Sea

When the wind catches the sails at night And the masts protest with screeching, Sailors say the ghosts are causing a fright From deck to crow’s nest beseeching. The captain already gone below the deck To spend an evening with a book relaxing, Is never summoned out of great respect To return to the helm, his day was taxing. By dawn the night noises are commonplace Especially when the sea is a soothing calm, As the sailors pick up their workday pace Accompanied by a sea-shanty or a song. In a week or so the port comes into view, The crew eagerly plans spending time ashore To discover in this exotic place what’s new, Freight unloaded, it is time for sailing lore.

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Date: 11/11/2021 10:59:00 AM
This sounds like it came from the pen of a navy man. Were you in the Navy Hank?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/11/2021 3:02:00 PM
Nope, but my father was. I was in the Air Force.
Date: 11/10/2021 6:44:00 AM
Milt, this nautical quatrain is a nice ode to life at sea...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/10/2021 7:39:00 AM
Delice, thank you so much. I always enjoy your comments.
Date: 11/9/2021 5:18:00 PM
Great description of the life on the sea Milt. Made me feel like I eas right there with them. Very enjoyable read. Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 6:29:00 PM
I love anything to do with the ocean. I love the beach. I can sit for hours and meditate sitting by the ocean...which is what I plan to do come November 16-23, while in Puerto Vallarta, Mexico. If you notice I'm gone, I'll be back after a week. This will be my second trip back without Deb. I planned it so I would be there on the anniversary of her death three years ago.
Date: 11/9/2021 3:03:00 PM
Heave Ho! my Hearties..... Can taste the salt and hear the sailors singing!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 3:26:00 PM
Me too, Shirley. I love sea stories, and I write a lot about the sea and the ocean. Love it.
Date: 11/9/2021 2:16:00 PM
A wonderful write, Milt - my kind of poetry. Hope you entered this one in the ship contest - it would certainly rate high! Bob H
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks, Robert, although I don't think I had a famous ship in mind when writing this.

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