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Freedom's Destination

Freedom's Destination Some foreign country Some funny name After awhile They all sound the same Grandpa went first Back then World War I And didn't come home 'Til the job was all done My Dad was then ripe When it came time for II Returning as hero's Only missing quite a few A Brother was the next in line To risk his life and limbs But Korea kind of fizzled out Especially for him Then came more strife in Asia And I was 18 "when" . . . They poked 'n had me turn 'n cough Then sent me off to win I thought when in those combat zones If ever I go down My folks will know that I was here Not hiding out of town We all served for freedom's sake Representing our hometowns To be damn sure our kids had homes Still setting on free grounds The countless before And the too many since Whose young life's were cut short I am sure would echo this . . . I fought 'til the end Now I've given my all But if nobody minds Let me make one last call When you get 'round to my marker And you're wondering that day Which words to scribe upon it What is there left to say Just keep it nice and simple And I'll rest forever proud . . . PLEASE LORD PLEASE HEAR ME NO MORE WAR ALLOWED JWC/Whysman @ 2001 (Edit 5/2013)

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Date: 5/5/2016 1:09:00 AM
enjoy your poem a second time. SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:29:00 AM
nice to read this poem again ***
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:34:00 AM
Perfect for Memorial Day. A VERY Great write! Well said.
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jerry. I enjoyed this first poem you have posted. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/24/2014 3:34:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jerry :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:29:00 PM
Hi Jerry,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2014 5:45:00 PM
Jerry, a powerful poem,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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