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Freedom To Fly

*Practicing first Pantoum poem She stands on a mountain, wanting to fly She spreads her arms out wide Then she slowly closes her eyes She feels the fresh air in the sky She spreads her arms out wide Standing with the freedom of a bird She feels the fresh air in the sky Her imagination brings peace up high Standing with the freedom of a bird Then she slowly closes her eyes Her imagination brings peace up high As she stands on a mountain, wanting to fly Heidi Sands 6/7/17

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Edward Mccall

Date: 6/14/2017 11:30:00 AM

Good job on your first pantoum Heidi :)"

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2017 12:42:00 PM

Thanks Edward. I have been trying a few. Challenging, but fun :)

Dean Wood

Date: 6/8/2017 3:54:00 PM

I read your 2nd pantoum and had to come back for the 1st. Nice job on this! Its a fun form don't you think? - Dean

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2017 4:01:00 PM

Hi Dean. Thank you. It is a fun form. I have never done it before and just now practicing with it. I was very impressed with what you did :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2017 12:46:00 PM

- I do not know this form ... but a beautiful poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2017 12:58:00 PM

Thank you sunshine. It can be a challenge. I appreciate your kind comment :) Have a nice day!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/7/2017 4:16:00 PM

Well done, Heidi! Both the form and its content have been tackled beautifully. The image you created gives a feeling of freedom. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2017 4:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul. I really appreciate the support as I am just trying this out. :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/7/2017 3:35:00 PM

Tough form done very well, nice one Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2017 3:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie. I appreciate your comment . I wasn't really sure how it is. Just learning it. :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/7/2017 2:54:00 PM

Practice makes perfect and this is definitely perfect. I loved this Heidi and I have grown to appreciate this form and you did a great job with this.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2017 3:12:00 PM

Maybe if I practice enough, I will actually fly! LOL

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2017 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Chris. Not really sure on this, but will try some more. Thank you for the kind comment :)