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Freedom Pub the Greatest Pub In Town

Dubious sandwiches that you were afraid to eat drinks and concoctions by a bartender name Bert the floor was sticky and the music too loud still, it was freedom pub The jokes were salty but they laughed out loud the peanuts were stale and the air was musty the curtains were faded they'd seen better days still, it was freedom pub Monday and Wednesday was Friday's fricassee the heat was turned low but their tongues were ok no it wasn't the Royal Palace nor Taj Mahal but heh, still, it was freedom, and the greatest pub in town. December 7, 2023

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Date: 1/9/2023 1:32:00 PM
So funny a pub is a pub you go in to drink , forget your worries and have some fun , maybe meet someone to fall in love ;) good one my friend. Good luck
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/9/2023 7:20:00 PM
Back with big congratulation
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/9/2023 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Eve, cheers !
Date: 1/9/2023 8:42:00 AM
Sis, I’m hoisted into my wheelchair, tapping away on this keyboard, ready to go with you, waiting at the end of my driveway! Hey, that sounds like a Bite Size poem! Anyway, will this excursion involve any time travel? (I think i carry an insurabce policy for that—) sounds like our kind of place. “Sticky floors” are always an invite to a good pub, as well as a recommendation like you’ve penned. Hugs. sally
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/9/2023 1:32:00 PM
your welcome anytime Sally :)
Date: 1/8/2023 4:10:00 PM
You really go to town, with this one, Vie., love the loud music though. Harry
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/9/2023 1:32:00 PM
lol love to have a good time in my mind Harry, :)
Date: 1/7/2023 4:41:00 AM
Enjoyed!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/9/2023 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Kim,

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