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Freedom- Tails

Fred wed me. Merve wed Bree. For fun, Merve hugged me. Fred downed Merve. He wed Bree when free of me. Fior nikko"s contest Heads/Tails

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/1/2012 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win.Very good poem with those restrictions.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/31/2012 11:31:00 PM

This was such a fascinating read for me, Joyce! Shucks, the price of freedom! Made me smile and yes, I see Russel's comments below and I can't help but totally agree with him! Super congrats on your win, Joyce :D

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/31/2012 10:58:00 AM

Good one, Congratulations, like this x

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/5/2012 11:16:00 PM

Reminds me of the transitive property of equality. If A equals B and B equals C, then A equals C. Good write Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2012 9:55:00 PM

very cute way to take the heads/tails challenge, dear lady!!!