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Peace floats over me
Like a Mother's womb
Forgives my imperfections
and
Gives myself to me
Time stops keeping count
and
Stirs my faintest hopes,
Reveals the reasons why
I stand before you now
To slow uncertain moments
and
Free my heartfelt chance
To help this place in time
and
Flow with peaceful mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/5/2009 4:15:00 AM
I love this one. It is very relaxing. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/2/2009 10:35:00 PM
A beautiful peaceful write here James, form your talented and gifted pen which your give wings and soar above the clouds my friend.
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Date: 8/2/2009 10:48:00 AM
Awesome writing again my friend..I love the second verse about forgiveness..wonderful work.
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Date: 8/2/2009 6:05:00 AM
this goes to my favs mt dear friend,forgivness and peace,slow uncertain moments,free my heartfelt chance--a gem-starting with peace and ending in peace-serene and beautiful poem--excellent--charma
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