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Free Will

Oh my Lord, Free Will, Thou hast granted To all of us But Ourselves, used it, slaves of our passions To become! © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 OCTOBER 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/22/2014 4:54:00 PM

words of wisdom demetrios beautifully penned

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2014 8:44:00 AM

I do not know if they are words of wisdom but I am happy you liked them, my friend, Liam!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/22/2014 4:00:00 PM

Demetrios . . . Indeed these are quite telling words and wise to the hilt. Mankind does have its weaknesses for those "passions." Superb Write!! (NOTE: I've been quite busy of late with a number of poetic writes, as I've also been doing some collaborative poems with Liam McDaid. Much to do and so little time. I will drop by whenever I can). A "7" here too My Friend!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2014 8:48:00 AM

Mein freund ich danke ihnen fur die erklarung! Thank you so much for the visit my friend, Gary and for your kind comment, not forget your generosity. Happy to see you again!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2014 6:16:00 PM

Wise words indeed Demetrios:-) Hugs jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/22/2014 12:48:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Jan, you very kind! Hugsx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/21/2014 2:20:00 PM

Wonderful words as always..I need to catch up with some of your writings. My time was limited the past few days....cheers Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/21/2014 2:30:00 PM

Good to see you, Tim! Thank you for your visit and kind comment!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/21/2014 12:37:00 PM

You have become as a wise old (young) Owl here with all these wise sayings. This one is as if written for me.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/21/2014 1:23:00 PM

I have been writing sayings like that for over thirty years now. If they are wise or not, I cannot say! Thank you though for your gracious comment! This is written for the vast majority of us human, dear Brenda but you probably are the one to admit! Ha-ha!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/21/2014 7:14:00 AM

Free will is a battle, and you have described it well. Enjoyed this and the understandings it brings to life. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/21/2014 7:26:00 AM

Thank you my dear, Casarah, for your visit and kind comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2014 6:36:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, dear Demetrios - Have a nice day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/21/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thank you, Anne Lise, for visiting and commenting! Have a nice day, you too!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/21/2014 6:18:00 AM

I love your poetry, Dr Trifiatis. :) Sublime.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/21/2014 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for loving my poetry, Dear Eileen. I have reciprocal feelings towards yours as well! The title of Dr. was unnecessary, since here I am as someone who is struggling to express himself, as everybody else! Thank you though for reminding me of that!