Free To Roam

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Earth life’s just a test and the manifest is a lucid dream of thoughts we do stream. Thus the universe, where we sing our verse is the realm we chose; so be in repose. Thought is a prison but if soul’s risen, humming our own tune, from pain we’re immune. In life’s catacomb we are free to roam, unless we stagnate under desire’s weight. Thus it’s up to us to board God’s bliss bus or languish in fear although God’s so near. 25-January-2023 Pick-A-Title, Vol 34 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/1/2023 2:41:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fantastic poem, Seeker:-)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/1/2023 3:47:00 AM

So happy you enjoyed, Edward ~ thanks for the recognition and for hosting

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2023 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A enjoyed your write. Love your line, "to board God’s bliss bus." All aboard. Have a blessed day/week..................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/30/2023 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, dear Paula

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2023 2:49:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Without Him there is so much more fear. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/25/2023 5:05:00 PM

Exactly. We are free at every moment but choose to cage ourselves in ether the past or the future

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/24/2023 11:20:00 PM

beautifully penned; nice to read

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/25/2023 1:31:00 AM

Thank you!