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True story  ...when I was about 20 I was traveling alone on a train in Birmingham.  A young man got in the carriage and he was transfixed with my shoes and asked me to take them off so he could see my feet - it was such an uncomfortable situation I got out at the next station!

Fred's Foot Fetish

Fred fantasised about ladies feet Just to touch them was Fred’s secret treat When a lady reveals Her toes, ankles and heels Fred’s fixation is clearly complete! 07~12~16
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Date: 7/13/2016 7:10:00 PM
Hmmm…there are some weirdos in this world!Human feet, to my mind, are the least comely or aesthetic of human body parts. . Hands say so much more than feet. You were wise to get off the train, Jan. I'll now have to think up a limerick about Fred. / M
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 2:21:00 AM
I look forward to reading it Maurice and I have to agree feet do nothing for me either lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 5:08:00 PM
Ha, yes, it's so creepy. People can be very weird!! at least you have good feet. Mine are ugggg.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 5:15:00 PM
Mine are ugh too and I detest them being touched lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 5:08:00 PM
I often use Fred for my limericks too. Did you know that? Something about that name!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 5:14:00 PM
I just like the alliteration of the F's lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 3:21:00 PM
Good one..On Dr.Phil's show one day he had a man who said that he had a fetish for woman with big feet..Dr. Phil told him that he wore a size 13..That man said no way man..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 5:14:00 PM
LOL Sara:-) I've got small feet I'm only a size 4 lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 8:53:00 AM
When lightly powdered and perfume sweet, a touch of polish feet are neat. But Freds' do creep people out....
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 8:57:00 AM
He sure freaked me out - even though it happened many years ago I have only just told my hubby when I read him this poem!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 3:02:00 AM
Excellent limerick. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thanks Ravi:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 5:14:00 PM
Jan, oh gosh that would be creepy.. great limerick that I am loving 7 ~
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 5:18:00 PM
It wasn't a pleasant experience - I heard something on the radio today about foot fetishes and volia another poem was born:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 3:38:00 PM
i have a friend who is so fixated with women's ankles, lol.. i needed this fun write today, jan!... huggs and mail soon!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 3:51:00 PM
LOL Nette hope he wasn't the one on the train with me lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/12/2016 1:25:00 PM
I was laughing from the notes Jan....I could imagine how uncomfortable you were. Excellent limerick.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 1:29:00 PM
I was alone in the carriage Tim and this guy got in - it was so uncomfortable I had to get out - had never realsised people could be attracted to feet lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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