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Fred Meyer ~ Salem,Oregon

Shopping in the produce department the fresh fruit started screaming"lets party pick me pick me" I grabbed a cart and started filling it with all the tasty treats I could see Mr. Blueberry Larry antioxidant man jumped in first, so many fruity stories he wanted to tell me followed by one large Orange, she called herself digestive helper Shelly Oh' what a gala event, the conversation kicked up with suggestions of their friends grab Billy Banana and his next of kin,the whole Gregory grape family and Larry Lemon Head the conversation pressed on, then all at once they all cried out in a plea lets race home, jump in the blender, we'll make you a cool smoothie,we're so tasty, you'll see !! Contest

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Date: 8/19/2010 4:59:00 PM
Love all the fruit you put in your cart. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:23:00 PM
YUM that sounds great. Congrats, Rick!!
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Grocery Grammar ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:23:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Rick
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Date: 8/10/2010 5:11:00 PM
Copngratulations LRick. Great poem in a fun contest. Lvoe, Joyce
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:23:00 PM
Ive shopped at Fred Meyer many, many times..good for you ....congrats. BG
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:28:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your success in my "Grocery Grammar" contest with this super write.. and thankxxx for always supporting my contest endeavors..with luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:42:00 AM
Your poem rocks, Rick, with or without the shaking blender. Like the way all the ingredients come together in this "smoothie" of a poem. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:57:00 AM
A nice way to write on the theme, Rick. Good luck.
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:48:00 PM
Smile ~ "I Love This Poem My Dear Gifted Friend!!!" ~ So light and lovely and colourful and filled with wonderful thoughts and images ~ "Beautiul My Friend" ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always, to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Splendid & Lovely, Smoothie Bright Night;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:49:00 PM
cute one, mine wasn't really funny at all I guess since everything really does go to my hips, good luck in the contest , thank you for all your kind words
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:47:00 PM
Funny Larry. You're even speedier than I. I thought I would be first this time. I can hardly take my hands off the keyborad, these contests are coming so fast. Hope to see you in the winner's circle. Love, Joyce
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