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Constance La France's Write Sixteen Beautiful Lines Contest...12 May 25...

               ' sometimes, tears hide behind the wail of pain...'by poet '  

 

Close-up of woman's eyes hidden by windblown hair.

 

Somehow among the hidden leaves of time when quietude swerves on a lane, there is a throb of evening's breath panting inside those marble eyes that if I gaze long enough into darkness your iced look will blink, to open windows that are locked by hinges creating angst enmeshed. The distant screams paint your irises jutting out from a frame of hard lids buried deeply on frigid weeds--- and the night loses its elegance while your crystal tears invade the glow in the lamp of your eyes-- I understand how private this time is when you fade away...knowing not I am there.

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Date: 5/18/2025 5:38:00 AM
The quote is clever with “wail of pain.” I can feel the angst in your verse, well delivered. Love that final verse! Hugs and congrats, Nette!
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Date: 5/17/2025 10:00:00 AM
Coming back to read again your poem and for a big congratulations on your first place win dear poet friend, Nette! Cheers! Hope you're well. God bless. GNyt. Hugs..hugs
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Nette :) - hugs
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Date: 5/14/2025 9:59:00 AM
Wow. I love love this. I am sure you ARE there, your empathy shows <3
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Date: 5/13/2025 4:18:00 PM
Oh, I'm deeply moved by this beautiful and heartfelt write from you my dearest poet friend and sis Nette. Another outstanding write from you. Pleasure to read from you this early morning before preparing for school. Thanks a lot for sharing your superb talent in poetry. I'll be back later to read more, ok. Take care always and enjoy your day. Hugs..hugs
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