Fragmented Feelings

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Candied kisses oft taste bitter-sweet when love's flavor fades yet lingers on. Leaving a hint of passion's heat candied kisses oft taste bitter-sweet. Fragmented feelings feel incomplete, like long-forgotten words to a song. Candied kisses oft taste bitter-sweet when love's flavor fades yet lingers on! Like long-forgotten words to a song, emotions haunt your frustrated heart. And you reflect on where love went wrong, like long-forgotten words to a song. While anxieties keep hanging on, threatening to tear your world apart. Like long-forgotten words to a song, emotions haunt your frustrated heart. Threatening to tear your world apart, the pain of lost love brings you to tears. While feelings of anxiety start threatening to tear your world apart. Tomorrow is assigned a bit-part within today's theater of fears. Threatening to tear your world apart, the pain of lost love brings you to tears.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/4/2018 11:25:00 PM

This form amplifies the moodiness of the poem. Lovely, Emile. Congrats on a well deserved high placement.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2018 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Judith S

Date: 4/2/2018 6:56:00 PM

So well written Emile! This is an interesting form that I was not familiar with. I loved the first line and it just got better from there! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ~Judy

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2018 8:33:00 PM

Thank you Judith, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.