Fragile petals

I am ravaged by a grieving I cannot end
viewing reality through a languid eye
a film shot through hazy clouds
like petals so fragile amid wild brambles.

My own clutter of aches and anguish
turns into a wet rag collecting heat
off the morning fog.  I let the silence linger 
to soak my dreams in it as a pampered plant.

Struggling to raise my level of spiritual poverty
is an emotional release I indulge myself,
to give in to a quiet and restrained euphoria,
like dipping into a watering hole on a parched savanna.


@jjote020824
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Creative work with some very descriptive metaphors within. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM
This has a lot of really great imagery, Josefina
Costales Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Andrea for stopping by.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Beautiful! … like petals so fragile amid wild brambles… a wet rag collecting heat off the morning fog…Enjoyed your poetics!
Costales Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 9:48 PM
Thanks Kim. Glad you enjoyed
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 2:27 PM
I am ravaged by a grieving I cannot end viewing reality through a languid eye--a splendid opening to this introspective write. And an inspiring ending! So well written, Josefina!
Costales Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 3:02 PM
Thanks-such an encouraging reply
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