Fragile Hearts

Fragile Hearts 


Fashioned of hand whispered crystal endeavors
Resting the perch of my long distant tears
Affectionate longings of three flavored wishes
Glass blown by sunsets in marmalade spheres
Indigo promises sent on a moon beam
Lighting a smile in a fine azure glow
Evening designs form a brittle horizon
Handle with care, oh she wants you to know
Every moment she senses it breaking
Accepting dreams that can never come true
Reaching for love far beyond destinations
Tracing the shadows of when this was new
Sending her pure fragile heart . . . out to you

Good night Soupers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/20/2018 4:35:00 PM
Beautiful Chris. It is so true how fragile our hearts can be. A great Acrostic, this is :)
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Date: 9/19/2018 4:26:00 PM
Wow, love this Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth
Date: 9/19/2018 12:11:00 PM
Good Afternoon Chris. This is beautiful. You truly know how to rhyme in your work where the entry reads effortlessly and smoothly. Also, the format was wonderfully executed. The Acrostic is not an easy format to flow. Thank you for sharing your work. May this day find you well. (smile)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 1:12:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Lisa. I always smile when I see your name on my poetry. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 9/18/2018 9:32:00 PM
Very nice acrostic Chris. Well done with a perfect ending. Have a nice evening...Charlie
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 1:12:00 PM
Thanks so very much Charlie. I appreciate your nice comment
Date: 9/18/2018 9:15:00 PM
Nice one Chris is this new? I had an acrostic contest fragile hearts a year or so back, I don't remember this one!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 1:12:00 PM
Hey John, thanks for stopping by. Check your soup mail
Date: 9/18/2018 5:54:00 PM
A sensitive piece Chris. The heart is easily broken. : )
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I always look forward to your visit
Date: 9/18/2018 5:34:00 PM
an engaging piece with the graceful flow of images, chris... again, you shine..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thanks so very much Nette.
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