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Four Soles

When they heard the drone of the jets They knew it was time to hide And find a safe place to escape the threat They knew they'd soon hear explosions outside Despite the war and its destructive sting They still did everyday things like going shopping, doing chores Just to survive one day more It wasn't long before the jets came again To deliver their explosive pain Some had no hiding place to choose And falling from the sky, came two pairs of shoes..........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/31/2017 4:41:00 AM
Very well crafted my friend...a winner in my court...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/30/2017 11:50:00 PM
Excellent poem. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/29/2017 10:47:00 PM
Very nicely done, Joseph, that last line through me, I was expecting a different ending... well done. ~*
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Date: 7/29/2017 7:32:00 PM
Crafty ending and great quatrains, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2017 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Lin
Date: 7/29/2017 7:22:00 PM
oh my, I love what you did here, Joseph. So you went ahead and used two pair instead of pairs. I am wondering if that was a typo or not!!
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2017 8:15:00 PM
I think two pairs is grammatically correct, thank you Andrea
Date: 7/29/2017 6:31:00 PM
I hate the term "collateral damage" Stirring write, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 7/29/2017 2:15:00 PM
This is such a moving piece Joseph! I can't watch the news with out tears and prayers for those who must endure such pain. We have a lot to be thankful for. Have a great weekend! : )
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2017 8:06:00 PM
The news can be so sad, thanks Connie
Date: 7/29/2017 1:45:00 PM
Striking. Excellent pen.
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Maureen
Date: 7/29/2017 1:28:00 PM
Excellent poem Joseph. I love it. and oddly, I just put in a poem called Cannon, and I felt like that's what I was hearing. Well done on this :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2017 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Heidi

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