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Four Elements

Good earth to bring forth flax and grain Cover to protect from the sun's rays To fill my larder, to keep out the rain A place for me at the end of my days A breeze to cool and caress my brow To stir the moisture, collect the cloud The nature of this only He knows how I give glory and praise to Him aloud The gift of fire, a blessing and curse To cook our food, keep out the cold Sometimes disrespect hurts our earth misusing gas, coal and liquid gold Water, the staff of life, cool pleasure A plaything, a necessity most needed The central core of every endeavor Common now, it’s case is not pleaded Some things God gives with no regret Some come of faith, hard work and sweat © Aug 12 2010 Charles Henderson

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Date: 9/14/2010 8:22:00 PM
A wonderful winning poem, Charles. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:35:00 AM
Many congratulations Charles on your win in Barbara's contest >> James
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Date: 9/3/2010 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations on the thirdn place win, Charles
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:05:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your super win in the Elements contest with this awesome write .. enjoy my friend..with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:51:00 AM
Very nicely written poem on the elements, Charles. I like the way you sum up your sentiments in the closing couplet. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn (soup mail returned)
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Barbara Gorelick's contest "The Four Elements". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:19:00 PM
fgreat work LCharles. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:02:00 PM
I did so enjoy your poem Charles..congrats and thank you for participating in my contest. BG
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Date: 8/13/2010 9:28:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Charles. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2010 6:45:00 PM
yup, really like this poem of yours Charles. Well done to say the least.
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Date: 8/12/2010 6:10:00 PM
The things that are the most worthwhile, indeed come with faith, hard work and sweat...I so agree! There is a sense of satisfaction that comes with working for what we have. This poem has heart! Good luck, Charles! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/12/2010 4:08:00 PM
A beautiful and excellent write Charles.. one that definitely should wear a winners circle badge in the final analysis of judging.. impression with lots of expression my friend..with luv..
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