Four Elements

Good earth to bring forth flax and grain
Cover to protect from the sun's rays
To fill my larder, to keep out the rain
A place for me at the end of my days

A breeze to cool and caress my brow
To stir the moisture, collect the cloud
The nature of this only He knows how
I give glory and praise to Him aloud

The gift of fire, a blessing and curse
To cook our food, keep out the cold
Sometimes disrespect hurts our earth
misusing gas, coal and liquid gold

Water, the staff of life, cool pleasure
A plaything, a necessity most needed
The central core of every endeavor
Common now, it’s case is not pleaded

Some things God gives with no regret
Some come of faith, hard work and sweat

© Aug 12 2010 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 8:22 PM
A wonderful winning poem, Charles. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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September 4, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Many congratulations Charles on your win in Barbara's contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Congratulations on the thirdn place win, Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:05 AM
Congrats Charles on your super win in the Elements contest with this awesome write .. enjoy my friend..with luv..
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September 2, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Very nicely written poem on the elements, Charles. I like the way you sum up your sentiments in the closing couplet. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn (soup mail returned)
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Barbara Gorelick's contest "The Four Elements". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:19 PM
fgreat work LCharles. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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September 1, 2010 at 10:02 PM
I did so enjoy your poem Charles..congrats and thank you for participating in my contest. BG
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Charles. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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August 12, 2010 at 6:45 PM
yup, really like this poem of yours Charles. Well done to say the least.
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 6:10 PM
The things that are the most worthwhile, indeed come with faith, hard work and sweat...I so agree! There is a sense of satisfaction that comes with working for what we have. This poem has heart! Good luck, Charles! ~ Carrie
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August 12, 2010 at 4:08 PM
A beautiful and excellent write Charles.. one that definitely should wear a winners circle badge in the final analysis of judging.. impression with lots of expression my friend..with luv..
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