Forsaken

This bumpy ride, it frightens me!
          The sun beats down upon my hide
              They've tied me up, we're on our way!
                      They said they're tossing me away!
As wind whips by, we're gaining speed
      My cries unheard, no voice to plead
           I'm swaying like a drunken fool
This old truck jars, with every turn
A fear in me as tires burn
     I'm pushed aside,
     They called me names
                         "Worn out, has seen much better days"
                          Outlived, they say, my days are done
         
Now disgraced
To be replaced
                  Forgotten that beneath my skin
                         Of peeling paint, of beaten face
                              A life in me, a charm within

This heartless deed, how can this be?...
       Please, won't you see the priceless me?
                   Beneath the grime, is treasured wood
                             A little care, restore my good!
I've seen so much in all my years
     Your child in laughter, yourself in tears
            And while you rocked, I soothed your fears
Tis not my fault that I've grown old
         While offering you a place to hold
            You bounced your child upon a knee
                Please hold a spot of care for me!

Don't dump me in among the muck
  Among the heap of worthless rot
       Have pity, please!!...forsake me not!
                 I'm worthy of a place, a part
                     A spot of mercy from your heart!
Please turn around, back to my home
I'll offer rest, for weary bones
When days are hard, and winter comes
I'll hold you up, when you're alone.



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Revised for Matt Caliri's contest "Speak, Chair, Speak"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Heck Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 9:12 AM
Dear Carrie - Congratulations on your WIN in Deborah's contest! Peace always, John
Strand Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Carrie Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 8:56 PM
Carrie - I have a real good friend who is an excellent wood worker - In fact he is multi talented in any form of natural art - anyhow this poem reminds me of the old children's rocker that was built in the mid 1800's and he restored it - amazing work he did for it was all busted up and he had to match all the broken pieces - Amazing work he did and an amazing poem you penned - congratulations neighbor - looks like a storm is coming - God Bless, YF4L, MJ
P. Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 11:06 PM
wonderful emotions... written well! congrats ~ Arany
Moreno Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations in placing in the contest Carrie...Raul
Gass Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 2:04 PM
Congratulaons, Carrie, on your win in Debbie's contest with this wonderful poem! Love, Robin
Winter Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 8:22 AM
YAY CARRIE! Congratulations on your awesome win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar
Herber Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 9:21 AM
I love this poem! For one moment--I saw all the treasures we cast aside come to life and beg to be given another chance! I really like how you bring the words to life!
Mason Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 3:32 PM
I learned how to drive on an old Model T Ford pick-up back in the 1950's and your write took me all the way back there ... LOL ... it had a stick shift on the floor and you could look at the road below the hole where the shift was ... smile ... but I never, ever had an accident in all my years of driving and the truck would be a museum piece by now ... GREAT WRITE!!
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February 1, 2009 at 2:14 PM
A beautiful poem, Carrie! And you were right about what you said about being overlooked (even though it's not important to me)...if you have a talent, people are threatened by it....I know I go into a deep depression when people are 'funny'....so I never go out of my way to be seen, most don't know of my outside life, lol. Good luck with the contest.:) Love, Sara
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Hi Carrie... new, new, new... gotta have "new" things... and all that history and care and style, precious connections tossed on the dump; throw away world and we throw away ourselves.... lovely and clever poem Carrie. Thanks so much for your comment
Strand Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 8:02 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian
Gass Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 6:46 AM
This is absolutely wonderful! Such sincere feeling in this story of the chairs plight. This is a wonderful! Good luck! Love, Robin
Winter Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 6:43 AM
Awesome write! I've never felt so sorry for a chair. Such emotion Carrie. Truly, so well done. Good luck! Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 2:48 AM
Awww, poor chair! I love personification, as it makes me become the subject, so sad, well done my dear, love, Kristin
Higgins Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 4:42 PM
Well written piece Carrie. You did the chair well..I wish all the best in the contest.
Mckenzie Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 3:52 PM
Carrie well expressed with deep feeling! Good luck in ther contest! Laura :)
Moreno Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Nice work Carrie and best of luck in the contest...Raul
Bingham Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Well Carie, I don't think I'll ever sit in a chair again without this poem coming to mind. Wonderful write, truly enjoyed, Blessings, Ron
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