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Forsaken

This bumpy ride, it frightens me! The sun beats down upon my hide They've tied me up, we're on our way! They said they're tossing me away! As wind whips by, we're gaining speed My cries unheard, no voice to plead I'm swaying like a drunken fool This old truck jars, with every turn A fear in me as tires burn I'm pushed aside, They called me names "Worn out, has seen much better days" Outlived, they say, my days are done Now disgraced To be replaced Forgotten that beneath my skin Of peeling paint, of beaten face A life in me, a charm within This heartless deed, how can this be?... Please, won't you see the priceless me? Beneath the grime, is treasured wood A little care, restore my good! I've seen so much in all my years Your child in laughter, yourself in tears And while you rocked, I soothed your fears Tis not my fault that I've grown old While offering you a place to hold You bounced your child upon a knee Please hold a spot of care for me! Don't dump me in among the muck Among the heap of worthless rot Have pity, please!!...forsake me not! I'm worthy of a place, a part A spot of mercy from your heart! Please turn around, back to my home I'll offer rest, for weary bones When days are hard, and winter comes I'll hold you up, when you're alone. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Revised for Matt Caliri's contest "Speak, Chair, Speak"

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Date: 3/4/2009 9:12:00 AM
Dear Carrie - Congratulations on your WIN in Deborah's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Carrie Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/3/2009 8:56:00 PM
Carrie - I have a real good friend who is an excellent wood worker - In fact he is multi talented in any form of natural art - anyhow this poem reminds me of the old children's rocker that was built in the mid 1800's and he restored it - amazing work he did for it was all busted up and he had to match all the broken pieces - Amazing work he did and an amazing poem you penned - congratulations neighbor - looks like a storm is coming - God Bless, YF4L, MJ
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:06:00 PM
wonderful emotions... written well! congrats ~ Arany
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Date: 3/2/2009 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations in placing in the contest Carrie...Raul
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:04:00 PM
Congratulaons, Carrie, on your win in Debbie's contest with this wonderful poem! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:22:00 AM
YAY CARRIE! Congratulations on your awesome win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 9:21:00 AM
I love this poem! For one moment--I saw all the treasures we cast aside come to life and beg to be given another chance! I really like how you bring the words to life!
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:32:00 PM
I learned how to drive on an old Model T Ford pick-up back in the 1950's and your write took me all the way back there ... LOL ... it had a stick shift on the floor and you could look at the road below the hole where the shift was ... smile ... but I never, ever had an accident in all my years of driving and the truck would be a museum piece by now ... GREAT WRITE!!
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:14:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Carrie! And you were right about what you said about being overlooked (even though it's not important to me)...if you have a talent, people are threatened by it....I know I go into a deep depression when people are 'funny'....so I never go out of my way to be seen, most don't know of my outside life, lol. Good luck with the contest.:) Love, Sara
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Date: 1/31/2009 1:02:00 PM
Hi Carrie... new, new, new... gotta have "new" things... and all that history and care and style, precious connections tossed on the dump; throw away world and we throw away ourselves.... lovely and clever poem Carrie. Thanks so much for your comment
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Date: 1/31/2009 8:02:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/31/2009 6:46:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful! Such sincere feeling in this story of the chairs plight. This is a wonderful! Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/31/2009 6:43:00 AM
Awesome write! I've never felt so sorry for a chair. Such emotion Carrie. Truly, so well done. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/31/2009 2:48:00 AM
Awww, poor chair! I love personification, as it makes me become the subject, so sad, well done my dear, love, Kristin
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:42:00 PM
Well written piece Carrie. You did the chair well..I wish all the best in the contest.
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:08:00 PM
Ohh this one is so sad, how could they throw that chair away...If only furniture could talk, can you imagine the stories we would hear....I am going to take better care of my chairs now, and if I see any old chairs someone has thrown away, I will probably get them and bring them home...excellent write, always, Christy
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Date: 1/30/2009 3:52:00 PM
Carrie well expressed with deep feeling! Good luck in ther contest! Laura :)
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Date: 1/30/2009 3:42:00 PM
Nice work Carrie and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 1/30/2009 3:31:00 PM
Well Carie, I don't think I'll ever sit in a chair again without this poem coming to mind. Wonderful write, truly enjoyed, Blessings, Ron
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