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Forsaken

cloistered a remote cell unattainable captive caged in heights out of reach and out of sight the lofty dismal tower of her despair confined within all hopes dangle anchored to a passing ray of sunshine or soothing ray of a moonglow though brutally indifferent to her predicament she dares to dream out a tiny crack of one ray some day caressing her cheek AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on November 4, 2020 for contest HELLO DARKNESS MY OLD FRIEND sponsored by ANTHONY BIAANCO Originally posted on April 13, 2020

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Date: 4/20/2020 2:25:00 AM
In a few lines, absorbingly, you manage to take charge of what forsaken is.
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Date: 4/20/2020 7:00:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, AP.
Date: 4/13/2020 7:19:00 PM
powerful ending... great penning Line.. hugs
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Date: 4/14/2020 12:26:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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