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For Joseph May's Contest

formidable they seek you out predators with a one track mind forget trouble don't scream and shout formidable diverted from the daily grind they don't care what you are about just know that you are in a bind the nasties just have all the clout your death wish is now sealed and signed you've got no time left to bug out formidable 4

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/21/2025 4:21:00 AM

Iv never tried this form i think, i dont remember trying it but youv done one that is very intriguing and entertaining and kept me hooked! Love the rhymes too! I need to have a look at other contests, i think theres a lot to catch up on here. Pleasure readin this! Sending you light

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/19/2025 11:54:00 AM

Super photograph and Roundel Dilly, I think that beetle has bitten off more than it can chew, I know some do eat ants, but not here! Adam and the ants taking on one of the Beatles possibly Ringo, sorry I digress, us humans are the ultimate predator, formidable but also vulnerable at times, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/19/2025 12:08:00 PM

Thanks - I have a full batch of contest writes on my page - this is for Joseph's photo prompt (or maybe I'm secretly an ant fan - Adam was on the radio in the car yesterday and I did rock out lol). Thanks for calling in, I'll see if I can solve the mysteries of other dimensions soon :) (although who's to say over time it's not turned into the Beatles v Adam and the Ants as alternative gladiators way of life reality). Haha proud to still be thinking of previously unthought theories

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/19/2025 2:05:00 AM

Loved this reminds me a song I love too, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S_xH7noaqTA&list=RDS_xH7noaqTA&start_radio=1

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/19/2025 2:25:00 AM

Ha I'll leave it to the ants and beetles of the world I think lol