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Forgotten Scars

Forgotten scars I met an old friend- haven't seen in a while he wore a strange look on his face.... how you been doing, what's happened to your smile? He said "it's not the time or place... Well, I don't need to imagine, all the lies he's heard (will he believe me-or does he believe her?) What makes a wise man, believe all that he hears? Does he forget all he knows? Give into his fears? Bridge 1 I forgot to remember all the pain but...it's coming back to me now Why did she go, and leave me that day? Some things are still a mystery, maybe it's better...this way! Chorus Though it hurts me to think back, I don't want to remember How her lips turned so cold, that day in December. She must have forgotten about my heart, and...how she promised forever Should I say the truth- say the truth cut open again...forgotten scars. Sometimes rumors are so tasty, swallowed whole while still alive and...before we realize it, we're digesting all the lies. Strange how quickly traitors leave, without ever giving thanks Don't believe them, or cash the checks from their bankrupt memory banks Bridge 1 I forgot to remember all the pain but...it's coming back to me now Why did she go, and leave me that day? Some things are still a mystery, maybe it's better...this way! Chorus Though it hurts me to think back, I don't want to remember How her lips turned so cold, that day in December. She must have forgotten about my heart, and...how she promised forever Should I say the truth- say the truth cut open again...forgotten scars. Should I say the truth- say the truth cut open again...forgotten scars. Should I say the truth- say the truth cut open again...forgotten scars. repeat and fade John Derek Hamilton December 28,2018

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Date: 12/30/2018 3:12:00 PM
such a sad one. I really like this and would enjoy hearing it to music. It would be so soulful! thanks also on my recent win if I did not say so yet, and have a blessed new year
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Date: 12/30/2018 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, yeah I'd like to hear the music too, coming soon...hopefully!
Date: 12/29/2018 10:43:00 AM
It sounds like December is a difficult time for you, John. This is a wonderful lyric. I had tried to write them, but I think they are too difficult. This part makes exceedingly good sense to me. "What makes a wise man, believe all that he hears? Does he forget all he knows? Give into his fears?" The more I see, the more I wonder if the TV and electronic devices are un-linking our dendrites?
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/29/2018 3:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot Caren!
Date: 12/28/2018 7:58:00 PM
Though one's heart may be mended, it will always bear the forgotten scar of once being broken and the pain of betrayal lingers as long as and whenever you remember.. a powerfully poignant lyric, John, of being haunted by the pain.. Warmest wishes to you for a happy new year, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/28/2018 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Susan I appreciate your kind thoughts and visit, let's hope the new year brings good news!
Date: 12/28/2018 2:37:00 PM
Yes, I agree- it is best not to linger in what might have been. Those scars of yesterday. They haunt, they tease- they give no relief. It is better to move forward, instead of reliving the past. Your thoughts touch me deeply. ~ Brandy
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Date: 12/28/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Brandy for your kind visit, and thoughtful comments!
Date: 12/28/2018 10:00:00 AM
Wow! Very powerful. Expressed well with so many good lines. Well done John :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/28/2018 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I can always count on you for a comment, thanks so much!

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