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Forgotten Nightmare

In the middle of the night, I struggle with all my might, but still, to awake in my nightmare, inside a forgotten fair. Where we rest on a hill, everything is quiet and still. But then demons chased me down, until I stopped to find a clown. Staring at me with an eyeless hole, shooting a bullet right through my soul. I saw an exit and started to slam, but then right behind me I heard a bam. Before I understood, I saw a doll in hood, and I started to faint, then later on I think I heard saint. I awoke with a surprise, along with thousands of cries. In front of me is the River of Styx, where I heard it to be fixed. I think I am going to die, or maybe that’s a lie. Because this is when I stop to scream, since I remember this bad dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/20/2016 1:29:00 AM
AWESOME TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, EEREN, Linda*"
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:00:00 AM
Eeren, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/18/2015 7:04:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Eeren - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2015 10:21:00 PM
Eeren,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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