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Ability to forget is a blessing Being forgotten is a curse… When I toil in the curse You some how seem to be blessed..!!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 6:30:00 PM

, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 6:17:00 PM

Krishna, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2011 4:33:00 PM

Please give once over to the form of haiku, I see you muse is quite active, Krishna

Krishna Priya
Date: 8/31/2011 3:06:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram, I have changed it..

John Smith

Date: 8/30/2011 8:12:00 AM

Four lines tell a story. Well writ.

Krishna Priya
Date: 8/31/2011 3:04:00 AM

Thank You John for the encouragement

Kash Poet

Date: 8/30/2011 7:39:00 AM

Nice wisdom in your poem Krishna...enjoyed.(PS:please have a look at the Form of Haiku.

Krishna Priya
Date: 8/31/2011 3:08:00 AM

Hi Kashinath, thank you.. that was my bad, I knew it was not a Haiku.. I have changed it to "Free Verse" hope I am correct this time..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 6:59:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Krishna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Krishna Priya
Date: 8/31/2011 3:01:00 AM

Thanks a lot Carol