Forgiveness-POTD

In dreams, I wander through time's chime,
Acts committed, causing pain in rhythmic crimes.
Suffering echoes in a remorseful dance,
Seeking forgiveness, I yearn for a chance.

Grant me pardon for my soul's misdirection,
Heal the deep dent, end this inner infection.
Forgive the others, let love be my reflection,
A symphony of mercy, a divine connection.

Sins aplenty, more than the seven sins' array,
Guilt shadows dreams, lingering night and day.
God's forgiveness, a beacon in the dark,
Love and affection, an eternal spark.

In dreams and reality, guilt intertwined,
A sacred plea, a repentant mind.
God's mercy, a balm for the contrite,
Forgiveness flows, washing away the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Jay! We all need forgiving and sometimes we have to forgive the unforgivable.
Baker Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 7:56 AM
A beautiful remorseful poem, Jay. I sure glad we have a forgiving God. I don't deserve it but certainly desire to be forgiven for all the mistakes I've made in life. The Christmas season gives me hope in Him that the price of all my sins has been paid. Smiles and Blessings, my friends. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
George Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 9:17 PM
We are all likely to err. But God is all forgiving before contrite hearts. Be comforted that God will wash away the sins from your soul... be it blood red. He will turn it into sow white. Great Poem. Missed seeing this as POTD. Congratulations dear Jay
Nicole Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 7:03 PM
' Forgive others, let love be my reflection. ' This is the right attitude to have. Remembering that, God forgives and forgets. Always strive to follow His example, even though it may be difficult at times. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Delaney Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 2:20 PM
Repentance is the powerful first step toward forgiveness, Jay and when it is given we have to learn to also forgive ourselves. Congratulatiions. On your POTD honor. SuZ
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations, Dear Jay, on your well-deserved POTD. A sincere, powerful, reflective composition, brilliantly written. Best wishes ~
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Namaste, Jay. Let me, beyond first say, forgive my late review of your exposé on 'Forgiveness' and how it bandies about between the how & now of life and which one will play out--if ever. Albeit, when of the said, is said, --transcends the best of one's life will ever be. Cheers to POTD for your righteous exposition. Aloha from Hawaii, William
Pandit Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:03 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Jay. Your thoughts on forgiveness resonate throughout. Enjoy your special day.
Kaufman Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Dear Jay, I loved this very humble and beautiful forgiveness poem of yours. Congratulations on the POTD recognition. You definitely earned it with your penning.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your wonderful write. To forgive is a powerful thing to do. Have a blessed day with your win..........................
Jones Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Great message and congratulations on potd
Edmonds  Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:19 AM
A wonderful poem on forgiveness Jay, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Kitchin Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Jay, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Seeker Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 3:29 AM
Warmest congratulations on POTD and you4 contest win, Jay. Let forgiveness be our reflex instinct!
Scott Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Doubles congratulations, Jay, for POTD and a competition placement! Such an important message beautifully considered and written ;))
Mcintosh Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 2:45 AM
Wonderful. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
Lane Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 1:47 AM
Congratulations on your potd. Jay. We cannot expect to be forgiven if we cannot forgive. Guilt shadows dreams and much more.
Cunningham Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 1:07 AM
Not always easy to do but if we don't do it can make us twisted and bitter. We all make mistakes in life and shouldn't be too quick to judge others. Congratulations Jay on the honour of POTD. Tom
Bowring Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Many congratulations Jay on POTD with this beautiful, well written poem. A very reflective read. ‘ God’s forgiveness, a beacon in the dark’ - such an inspiring line. I especially love the last line too. Enjoy your celebratory day. Blessings to you :):)
Poet Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:21 PM
You have some strong writing, Jay. This season, I believe we all yearn for forgiveness—from those around us, from within ourselves, and from God.
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