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FOREVER VOW

“Till death do us part.” Such we vowed to each other Will you always feel my love? God* is our witness. You fulfilled well your promise. Wait for me in heaven, dear.
*1 John 4:16 And we have known and believed the love that God hath to us. God is love; and he that dwelleth in love dwelleth in God, and God in him. March 1, 2024 Honorable Mention, "BiteSize Poem no83" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier; judged on 3/26/2024

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Date: 3/1/2024 12:43:00 PM
Well written. Everlasting love! :)
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Date: 3/1/2024 5:16:00 AM
Dear Beata, your poem beautifully encapsulates the eternal bond of love and commitment. The depth of emotion and sincerity in your words is truly touching. The vow to love each other till death and beyond is profound. Your poem is a testament to enduring love and the hope of reuniting in eternity. A very heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/1/2024 4:53:00 AM
a lovely, well written Sedoka, perfect for the contest. enjoy your day
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