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Forever Promises

Forever promises On this silent beach, sunset emotions filter a bashful skyline We watch…poetry written in the sand slowly eclipsed by a drowsy tide, sea foam whispers erasing words of deepest love Minute granules float somber beneath aquamarine sighs You fill my arms upon moistened shores, velvet lips satisfy my thirst as warm salt water tingles gently frame our bodies, drenched in the moment My eyes immerse in this beauty which consumes me Two souls, a lone silhouette casting waves of rhythmic yearnings on a desolate strand, passion glistens of moonbeam blushes as forever promises are kept

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Date: 6/30/2017 11:16:00 PM
Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, passionate, sweet love poem in every single way:) Very enchanting! Just awesome!:) I truly enjoyed reading this one again from you Chris! A 7 + ! A fav.For sure, I'll be back and continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:)) Spill ink!Take good care.Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D
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Chris Green
Date: 7/3/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thank you again my friend for finding and commenting on some of my older pieces. I really appreciate you doing so and I am thrilled you enjoy them so much.
Date: 12/16/2016 4:18:00 PM
Always & Forever... Beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 4:37:00 PM
When it is always and forever it sure is beautiful my sweet friend. Thank you so much.
Date: 12/16/2016 5:47:00 AM
It's really freezing here, this warmed all my senses, lovely and sensual, warm salt water tingles, pon moistened shores, oh my. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 8:14:00 AM
Happy I could warm you up a little Paloma. Thank you so much.
Date: 12/16/2016 2:09:00 AM
Being on the beach, it is my favourite place to be. I love this, I can almost feel little ripples of water surrounding you.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren for your always kind words.
Date: 12/15/2016 6:33:00 PM
I love this romantic piece, I could swear you were our dear friend Tim with his brilliant romantic writes... a 7 very good Chris Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 8:13:00 AM
Nope, just me Chris. Not sure I'll ever reach Tim's level. Thanks so much Eve.

Book: Shattered Sighs