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Forever Never

Flamboyant flower Glorious bloom drifts away Forever never. (January 11, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin) (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/11/2011 5:16:00 PM
Nice haiku, but you have one too many syllables in the last line. A suggestion: how about replacing the last line with "It's ephemeral". You are saying the same thing with different words while keeping the line at five syllables.
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