Forever Never

Flamboyant flower
Glorious bloom drifts away
Forever never.


(January 11, 2011  Wausau, Wisconsin)

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 11, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Nice haiku, but you have one too many syllables in the last line. A suggestion: how about replacing the last line with "It's ephemeral". You are saying the same thing with different words while keeping the line at five syllables.
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