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Forever Looking

Lost my life exemplifies every definition of that word lost in my life lost in myself lost on a path that ends no where lost in a world that has no point no direction whats the purpose im too lost to find myself when im right here beneath my clothes beating heart flowing blood but im no where just lost

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Date: 11/3/2009 11:31:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Chamonique. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2009 8:43:00 PM
Perhaps not completely lost, aren't you here? Maybe there is a little light somewhere after all? A sad write, wishing you a better view very soon. I will light up a candle for you tonight. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:12:00 PM
Very heartfelt words, Chamonique. I have found that sometimes I have to "step outside" of myself, just to find myself. Perhaps too much introspection can make us feel lost -- it surely has that effect on me. I'm sure a lot of readers can relate to this. Most of us have felt "lost." Love, Carolyn
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