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Forever In Your Eyes

Forgive my fatigued fingers as they get lost in the calligraphy of your curvature, Outlining a hypnotic silhouette so provocative that my sinful glances feel forbidden; Remind me with a kiss from your frisson-infused lips that my heart roars untamed, Echoing the passion-draped whispers of my breath as it fights your endless thievery; Validate my delight to roam in the carnage of your eyes as you pierce my silent walls, Evaporating the melancholy that dolefully drifts down on the nights we sleep apart; Rare is the moment I'm unable to recall your dulcet ebullience as my eternal embrace-- Inside your petal-burst eyes is where the cozy warmth of love's inglenook keeps me safe, Never deceived by swollen dreams I hear the symphony of your voice even in slumber; Your starlit smile beleaguers wasted desires to lie hidden beneath a penumbra of sadness, Opening the curtains to the wild tempest of a sun-splashed canvas dappled atop my bliss; Unfettered felicity undulates tranquil waters ravaged by the rhythm of your sultry song, Restlessly granting me the gallantry to traverse the infinite seas of our mellifluous love; Evermore I promise to quench the thirst of your love in an incessant deluge of devotion, Yearning for more than just seldom lipstick-kisses and annual candle-dinner traditions; Expecting to burn in the scorch of your gaze I vow countless chapters of a fiery sunrise, Scattered like the pencil shavings of love's unspoken story, written, forever in your eyes; July 20, 2016

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Date: 12/13/2016 2:05:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Acrostic, well done ~
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Sam Jameson
Date: 12/14/2016 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, BW-- I appreciate the kind words. Thank you for the generous placement.
Date: 12/13/2016 9:05:00 AM
Wow just can't say enough about this poem! Congrats again for your placement in the contest, was a pleasure 5th time around.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 12/14/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your praise. I enjoyed this write very much, and recently life has blocked my writing but I still thought this one was worthy of an entry. Thank you for having put up the prompt on it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
Date: 8/18/2016 5:18:00 AM
So sensual. Amazing Sam. Well done.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 8/29/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jean-- I'm glad you enjoyed the dance. Have a great night--
Date: 8/17/2016 1:57:00 PM
Sam, just beautifully written dear friend...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Sam Jameson
Date: 8/17/2016 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, Laura-- happy to partake. I appreciate your kind remarks on the work.
Date: 8/2/2016 2:18:00 AM
Congrats. Perfect poem...
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Sam Jameson
Date: 8/2/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Miltos-- very generous feedback.
Date: 7/27/2016 3:32:00 AM
Congrats Sam, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/27/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy :)
Date: 7/25/2016 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Sam, well done...
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/25/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie--
Date: 7/25/2016 11:15:00 AM
Beautiful romantic acrostic Sam many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/25/2016 2:01:00 PM
Many thanks, Jan-- I appreciate you dropping by with your kind congratulations :)
Date: 7/25/2016 7:02:00 AM
This is beautiful. Congrats Sam!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/25/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Angelus-- I'm happy that you found some beauty in the words.
Date: 7/24/2016 10:29:00 PM
A deserved topster, Sam, well done. Regards, Viv
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/25/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Viv-- appreciate the kind comments.
Date: 7/24/2016 4:25:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/24/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT-- appreciate the kind remarks :)
Date: 7/24/2016 2:05:00 PM
I find your write filled with beauty and love....Congratulations on your first place!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/24/2016 10:16:00 PM
I'm happy that enjoyed the read-- thank you for the kind congratulations!
Date: 7/24/2016 10:45:00 AM
Hi Sam, You have penned a great acrostic. If was fill with love, passion and desire. Congrats on your 1 st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/24/2016 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis-- I truly appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 7/24/2016 7:34:00 AM
This was outstanding Sam, I hope it gets recognition it deserves, top ten best new poems at least.Everything I was looking for! Congrats on stand alone first place!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 8/2/2016 12:48:00 PM
Happy to hear you enjoy it, even as a re-run ;)
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2016 9:51:00 AM
Back for a fourth read can't get enough, going into my faves and a7!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/24/2016 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, John-- I'm truly humbled by your remarks. I'm just happy for the chance to create new creative pieces and compete in these contests with other great wordsters. It's always an added bonus when my work is able to connect with the readers as well-- thank you for prompting this contest, I'm honored for the placement-- have a great night my friend.
Date: 7/20/2016 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful Sam..goodluck:)
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Sam Jameson
Date: 7/20/2016 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Madhupriya--

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