Forever Gone

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the rains came and never left you took away my sunshine AP: 2nd place 2023 Posted on June 13, 2023

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/15/2023 2:06:00 AM

Line, The overwhelming sadness is palpable in this brief poem. I have always loved your posts and do hope that in time this tremendous loss will shift for you. Sincerely, Nancy

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/15/2023 4:34:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Nancy.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/14/2023 1:23:00 AM

Such pain depicted in these two lines, amazing!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2023 6:28:00 AM

thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Joanna ~