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Forever Girl

Forever girl You are, my star that shines in the night... illuminates my life My one love, your love, has captured me... and yet I feel so free And now, I'd do anything for you... live my life for you, you know, my love is true And when, you smile at me it brings, joy to my world, and you'll be eternally... my, forever girl Bridge You are everything, I need in this world My heart is yours, my, forever girl Now, we are, bound in body, and soul Our two halves, they make us whole We'll keep alive, our eternal flame I'll give to you my name Our love will keep, shinin' like a new dime Will stand the test of time Now that I know, that you are, meant for me I'll gladly, share eternity... together, in our new world with you, my sweet, forever girl! Bridge You are everything, I need in this world My heart is yours, my, forever girl Repeat bridge twice fade to zero John Derek Hamilton June 25, 2017

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Date: 6/30/2017 9:31:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/30/2017 10:10:00 AM
Thanks Funom
Date: 6/27/2017 1:32:00 PM
What a beautiful love song John - a forever love is something we all dream of. I would LOVE to hear your lyrics set to music:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/27/2017 2:45:00 PM
Some are being worked on but it's a slow process thanks Jan!
Date: 6/26/2017 5:52:00 PM
A forever love that shines like the stars..beautiful lyrics John
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2017 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 6/26/2017 2:06:00 PM
- A flourishing love, John - Beautifully written from the heart - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2017 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise I do appreciate your visits and comments!
Date: 6/26/2017 12:48:00 PM
smashing romantic piece, excellently penned John, blessings, Gordon
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2017 1:29:00 PM
Smashing, I guess that's good right? lol thanks for the positive review Gordon, nice to "see" you!
Date: 6/26/2017 11:19:00 AM
Wish I could find a forever girl:) Nice one John. You old romantic:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2017 1:27:00 PM
There's someone for everyone, like you told me, it's when you stop looking, that's when it happens, maybe true, thanks for the support Danny!
Date: 6/26/2017 8:15:00 AM
This is a very sweet love song! :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I do appreciate your constant support!
Date: 6/26/2017 1:10:00 AM
What an enchanting love song, John! You write them so well:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Jo, she does inspire me to keep writing!

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