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For Constance La France's Carpe Diem poetry contest.

 

“You don't lose if you get knocked down; you lose if you stay down.” Muhammad Ali I've been struggling to exist, since the day I was born. A dehydrated butterfly in a garden without rain. A white page, an inkless quill, a silent poet without words. But when eyes feel fuzzy, head a little dizzy, and the pills don't work, we fight the confusion like a gladiator without a sword. a knight without a shield. Every time we get a bit of respite, it's time for another fight. Sometimes like an old boxer, we get knocked to the ground, but like a fledgling I resurface. What other choice do I have? I'm no mercenary, no militant, no martyr. I'm a wounded samurai under a cherry blossom tree, bloodshed blade by my side. I drink pain like a glass of water, embrace agony like a lover, suffocate sorrow until it's over. Pain is a reflection of my existence, my wounds a reluctant legacy, written from massacres of warfare - but there is no purpose without struggle. I always keep hope for tomorrow, but live for today. Life is an advent of adversity, we win, we lose, we learn. We are all warriors, as life is one constant conflict. We are forever fighters.

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Date: 8/7/2024 2:37:00 PM
Silent, love the quote and the poem, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, well done, Constance
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Date: 7/3/2024 8:55:00 AM
SO, You've expressed something very close to the meaning of life. We fight for what we believe in with all the passion we have. Is there any other way? You're making me smile. I suppose it would be OK to take a break for a few days and spend some time on the tropical island you previously wrote about!
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Date: 6/28/2024 8:42:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "forever fighters" write. What a great quote/ending. Love your line, "we win, we lose, we learn." That is life. FAV for me... Enjoy your day as you write it away.......................
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Date: 6/26/2024 10:55:00 AM
"I always keep hope for tomorrow, but live for today." Words to live by...to die by...in my last breath I will expire life...and follow!. As usual your writing never disappoints. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/26/2024 7:57:00 AM
Dear Silent One, Well, as always, your poem really moved me. I loved Mohammad Ali and lived through his fighting era, and he was quite the antagonizer. Of course, it made him a legend, along with his record. You have to love him even more! As far as your poem, I think you captured the struggle and resilience in an incredibly powerful way. Your words speak to the heart of what it means to fight through pain and keep going. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/26/2024 5:49:00 AM
Great theme and yes, there's no merit or advantage to giving up. We're all warriors... so true. This feels almost personal. One of your best of late, imo
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Date: 6/25/2024 6:47:00 PM
Potent and inspiring words, Silent... enjoyed reading
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Date: 6/25/2024 1:18:00 PM
Great poem, S. O. For some reason, I really liked this: I drink pain like a glass of water, I think I drink it like it's nasty soured milk. haha. I really love how you use metaphors in your poetry.
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Date: 6/25/2024 9:52:00 AM
The struggle for existence is intensely and creatively explored in this realistic and beautiful piece. The use of metaphors to point out and express the numerous feelings that come with the complexities of life, its emptiness and confusion is profound. "I'm no mercenary, no militant, no martyr. I'm a wounded samurai under a cherry blossom tree." you sure do have a way with astounding pairs. Success in the contest.
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Date: 6/24/2024 7:12:00 PM
wonderful poem, i love all images specially the gladiator without a sword, it still "haunts" me, Thanks poet
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Date: 6/24/2024 6:01:00 PM
We are all warriors, as life is one constant conflict...true! We handle the battle we are in knowing it will pass and yes there will be others. Hugs
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Date: 6/24/2024 4:06:00 PM
Hi SO very true words you have written in this beautiful hope you are keeping well dear friend hugs Shadow
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Date: 6/24/2024 1:43:00 PM
oh man, you carpe'd the diem in this one SO, beautifully written yet unveiling aspects of your soul, making it a bit more easy for me to pick you out in a crowd of battle weary poets
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Date: 6/24/2024 1:28:00 PM
So true and such wisdom in your words woven in such a seamless manner as always dear silent one! I agree with what youv conveyed here. Sometimes we just have to keep fighting forever to survive, when you get knocked down, you must always get up and fight harder. I really love the similes and how deeply meaningful this is! Especially “ we fight the confusion like a gladiator without a sword. a knight without a shield” just brilliant! How youv described it! Its such an empowering and sincere poem. And the opening is really soul stirring! So evocative and powerful! You do this form very well! And the way you write on this subject is so creative! It has a philosophical touch to it and i cant help but feel inspired! Like always! Life , teaches us to keep fighting keep hope for tomorrow close to our heart! Love this! Best wishes for the contest
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