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Forever Day - Contest

SHe walks along the path with a SWING HE holds her hand as they SWAY Unknown to HER in his pocket a RING will ask her to SHARE his forever DAY She looks at him with a smile all UNKNOWING From this moment in love with him she'll STAY HE stops under the weeping willow TREE SHE goes on tiptoes to kiss his face THERE he gently PUSHES her away to SEE A pretty BLUSH as on his knees with loving CARE He asks her to marry him, hoping she will AGREE A lifetime of love with him she will SHARE Penned 1 July 2015

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Date: 7/30/2015 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Seren :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:33:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning work Seren! Amazing!
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Date: 7/29/2015 11:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win seren! ~lee
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Date: 7/8/2015 2:47:00 PM
Good luck with the contest Seren I hope this does so well for you - am still battling with mine lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/3/2015 3:51:00 AM
Seren, simple words but with so much gravity in it! ~Olive ELoisa =)
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:16:00 AM
love it seren .. wonderful poem !!
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