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Forever Beautiful

Such a perfect night The kind I’ve been dreaming for And I’m falling hard, so fast Yet inside I’m still craving more Arms wrapped around you Feel that mesmerizing breeze The urge, so strong.. to touch On your neck I whisper.. please Close your eyes and smile Paint a perfect fantasy Escape in these tender moments Your breath on me.. it’s ecstasy If this is what you’ve waited for If I’m the one you need If you want to dance till dawn Take my hand, and let me lead I’ll sing you autumn love songs My eye’s caress will say they’re true The stars are winking their approval So get lost in my two blues You’re like a sexy swaying willow The moon a teasing evening light Your touch echos every memory Like twin butterflies in flight Ivory skin that makes me linger Red lips.. take me to school Teach me all your wonder Girl, forever beautiful! If this is what you’ve waited for If I’m the one you need If you want to dance till dawn Take my hand, and let me lead Cause in the morning dreams will end Sweet fantasy.. you could not last Echos taunt in morning sunlight Forever beautiful.. now in my past ~Lyric Man Note: An inspired echo. Not sure how I wanted it to end. Happy (drop the last four lines) Heartbreaking (keep those final four).

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Date: 7/8/2020 8:13:00 AM
These are beautifully and carefully worded lines... It touches the heart Keep it up
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Date: 10/16/2019 9:12:00 AM
I married my forever beautiful girl. This is lovely.
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Date: 10/8/2019 4:18:00 PM
How beautiful this is..I love the ending...The sad melancholic ending..Yes in the early dawn..all dreams will be gone..But still many nights to follow..Lovely and sweet..Glad to see you posting.Love your poetry ..Wish to see it more often.
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Date: 10/6/2019 7:28:00 PM
Forever Beautiful.. in that dream. Now, forever and always. That's how I see it. Lyric Man. Oh yes, and such a breathtaking fantasy- a moment of pure ecstasy. Love lingers in the night, in the melody of your words. I am breathless and in bliss. "If this is what you’ve waited for. If I’m the one you need" Yes, indeed. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/6/2019 11:20:00 AM
aww sweet Lyric Man you are back to what you do best, I like both endings but prefer the happy ending as we sometimes have so much sadness in our lives ... then again dreams can come true:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/6/2019 8:19:00 AM
Beautifully sad lyric Dave, I love melancholy so I keep the last 4 lines!
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Date: 10/6/2019 7:29:00 AM
Always love it when you post, your poems are always so well written.. you do romance very well....
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:21:00 AM
A very romantic lyric Dave, I love happy endings ( who doesn't. ) So I'll ditch the last four. Hope all's well. Tom
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:30:00 AM
Minus those four lines.. I’m in bliss.. I agree with you! But I wrote it both ways so that my melancholy friends may enjoy a tender misery ;)

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