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The timing of the setting sun Rhymed with a union meant to be In glowing skies, the wait is done Released by a kiss to be free Like the birds flying through the sky One step to the end of the dock Their love was without question why Riding on the tick of a clock From this day, they would never part Their promises made at the sea From truth living deep in their hearts They lit up under skies with glee A kiss forever at sunset Calming as the water below Fate shined upon this place they met With love they will never let go Heidi Sands 3/25/18 Photo #3 *Placed 1st in the: Picture This contest.

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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly

Date: 4/2/2018 8:53:00 PM

The forever kiss so many wish for, captured nicely in pen, etched forevermore, Heidi. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thank you very much Artsie :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/1/2018 10:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Very romantic.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2018 5:46:00 AM

Thank you Susan :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/1/2018 2:51:00 PM

A beautiful sigh of love at a pier at sunset. My deepest compliments!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 2:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Ralph. I appreciate your comments :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/1/2018 10:55:00 AM

Lovely, WINNING poem, Heidi! Janice

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 11:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Janice :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/1/2018 10:32:00 AM

Truth, a kiss can bond two for life, or sadly say goodbye! A beautiful poem, congratulations on your first place... Mick

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Mick! :)

John Gondolf

Date: 4/1/2018 9:36:00 AM

Heidi, I love a beautiful, romantic poem, and this is exceptional. Congrats on your well deserved first place. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 9:40:00 AM

Thank you John. I am happy you like it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2018 8:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Heidi :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 8:52:00 AM

Thank you very much Ann-Lise. I appreciate it. Happy Easter :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/1/2018 7:58:00 AM

Beautiful romantic eloquence dear poetess! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 8:52:00 AM

Thank you Maureen! I appreciate your kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/1/2018 7:53:00 AM

Congrats Heidi for your #1 win..this was superb writing!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. That is kind of you to say :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/1/2018 7:50:00 AM

"Released by a kiss to be set free"..A beautiful romantic poem Heidi..Great write and win...Congrats

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/1/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate the kind feedback and placement. It was an enjoyable contest to write for. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/26/2018 7:49:00 AM

Just beautiful, Heidi and you've captured the essence of the photo! Great entry for the congest xxoo Happy Monday!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. Happy Monday! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/25/2018 2:45:00 PM

You captured the essence of their love ..just as the photo shows..giving a stature of permanence and commitment..well written poem, Heidi. A winning entry.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/25/2018 2:49:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Your feedback is always appreciated. I hope you are well and having a nice day. :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/25/2018 12:37:00 PM

So romantic and lovely - enjoyed this!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/25/2018 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Michelle. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. :)